I really like your writing. Al and Scorp are so cute and Harry and Draco aren't too bad either. XDD You've really got me curious about Al's pill taking. I'm guessing that his magic is too powerful for his body to handle, so he has to take pills that completely inhibit his magic use, leaving no chance for it to spin out of control and possibly kill him. Poor dear. :( That's just a guess, either way, but I still want to snuggle him. I like how Harry and Draco's relationship is progressing. Yay, amusement park!

good

Gah! Why'd you leave it there? It was getting good. I do hope you're just taking a short recess on this...

Ahh, and love blossoms...

How sweet, really. 'Pretty dumb' or 'pretty but dumb', hmm, Draco? Don't worry, us fangirls never let the truth slip away!

Please update soon!

please update soon, this is great. i love the way you show both harry and draco's vulnerabilities coming to the surface and how you allude to scorpius and albus' feelings toward each other. thank you and please update!

sazza

this is a good update. poor Al so sad but then he's happy which is good :D lol

keep goin ! i like it!

Pretty good chapter. I do hope you keep up your good work. This has some interesting potential.

HARRY PICK ONE OR THE OTHER O: Poor dears. <3

Harry and Al arn't very popular are they? And I'm liking the idea of Draco in the kitchen. :) hehehe. :) Looking good so far.
Luvs and lollipops

*shocked!!
you finally updated!

i love the blushing Draco... damn cute!! >_<

I kinda feel bad for James... he seems to be getting the short end of the stick in his family, being the oldest and normal. His own sulkiness, which has been there every time we have seen him, seems to me to come from the fact that he may be ignored. I feel so sad for Al. And for Harry, who was completely snubbed by Draco after a day of bonding. But then again I guess he deserved it, the daft bugger, for not realizing long ago that Ginny was not a good match for him and not realizing that Draco liked him. ;) Loved the chapter, despite the many characters it made me feel sorry for.

it's rather strange to me that you can manage to make your story both humorous and bitterly solemn simultaneously. you are also rather adept at concealing plot twists so that they seem like they can be multiple things, such as albus taking those pills; from what i can tell, the reason can be either a) albus' magic is too potent for him to be able to control, b) there are legal restraints in place to keep him under control, or c) there's an even more obscure reason that's too vague to properly define yet is still heavily implied despite having no idea on what's being implied in the first place. nevertheless, i enjoy reading this, and await the next time you update.

I think this story is super cute and I love it very much! You should definately update soon! Also I love how close Al and Scorpius are so close and so cute. It really is true how fast little kids become the best of friends!

This is a very wonderful story. O laughed so many times! Especially at the zoo part with the puppy dog eyes. lol that was just wonderful.