Dag, I was laughing so hard this last chapter...but I had to keep quiet cuz it's late and peoples are sleeping...I think I busted a rib or something...

^_^ Really, one of my favorite bits is the grammar of the Dinobots. You bot, me bot...it's like the early English language attempts of children...so utterly endearing, even when threatening each other. :D

I've just had a vivid picture of simmons running away from the dinobots, Laughing really hard.

cackles evilly

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! *wipes tears from eyes*

Man! That was really funny! I even started laughing in my class while reading this and now I'm getting weird looks! Anyway, that was great! Keep it up!

~Serin

Oh my, this story is hilarious! I nearly fall over from my chair reading this! ^^

Should have thrown in a line about the leadership challenge and Simmons might have been tricked into willingly accepting particularly with the thought of him being in charge of them... before realising that even the smallest one could beat him to a pulp if he were to fight bare handed...

Interesting style and I am glad for what you have produced, both here and in other stories,
~Reflections

Please keep on writing. I really like the story and can't wait to read more. THis last chapter was too funny. Sam-bot, dino-bot. Rachet=Mom bot. I can't wait to see what they will do if the decepticons try to steal Sam. they'd probably give Sam back just to get any peace from the dino-bots. HAHA. Please write more and post soon.
Thanks
Jade

Oh dear. Oh dear oh dear oh dear... lol

I couldn't stop smiling as I read this chapter! xDD Poor Sam's got it rough, but at least they all got Simmons with this one. I'd have to say, Ironhide's suggestion of a flamethrower really did it. I got a couple funny looks for busting out laughing! xD

This story is made entirely of 100% epic win. Hilarious, in character, and this last chapter nearly made me bust a rib from laughing so hard. Sam-bot the honorary Dinobot.XD*snickers*

That was brilliant XD! I was laughing the whole time I read this, especially chapter 5. ME KIT572 GIVE YOU 10/10 XD!

Ha,ha,ha,amazing story,totally loved it!

Cute clever chapter.

Oh this was great!! I love how the Dinobots wanted someone else with a name that started with S to join them! LOVE IT!

And them chasing Simmons around... LOVE!

Great story!! It was a lot of fun to read!

The Dinobots are a handfull, aren't they? :)

I suppose Simmons deserved it here, but let's not get too overboard. ;)