|Reviews for Broken|
| larabrambleofbywater 8/5/08 . chapter 2
Wow...this is so good...and such a departure from the usual Claire/Quil story. I loved it...except Claire made me cry. Thanks for the great read, can't wait to see what happens next!
| Biloxi Girl 8/5/08 . chapter 2
Surely you weren't serious when you said you'd update once a week! Um... that just isn't working for me! Any way we can get them quicker? This is shaping up to be fabulous!
| RedDawn07 8/5/08 . chapter 2
It was so sad but so good. I like seeing a strong Claire. She's a smart kid. You did a great job with the dynamic between her and her mom - that's a tough tough thing - the reality that your kids old enough to make the decisions that you can't make for them.
And I just can't WAIT for her to get to Washington.
| Tulililli 8/5/08 . chapter 2
I liked this chapter so much! Yeah, it was really sad, but it wasn't any more sad than it had to be, and the emotions and reactions are extremely realistic. I remember when we had to come to terms with my grandma going in to hospice, and even though it was quite a different situation, the reactions of my family were really close to what you wrote.
| addicted.2.twilight 8/5/08 . chapter 2
Thank god every chapter isn't gonna be this sad! lol. I was crying so much. I want Claire to be happy! Quil where the heck are you? lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| KaylinNeya 8/5/08 . chapter 2
Wow!, yet again you amaze. The emotion is so raw, yet everything is so believeable it's hard to remember it's not real (god forbid anything like this would really happen to someone)
you're really outdoing yourself. thank you for the reply from my last review by the way. its nice to know they get read and considered.
i cannot wait for more. No pressure, i just really want to see how Quil is doing and how everyone in La Push will react. i really hope she doesn't die.
I really am your number 1 fan.
| Bellashouldvebeen 8/5/08 . chapter 2
goodness that was a tear jerker. i cried a lot during this. but thanks. i always seem to like these stories, i just think i like a good cry. you have a way with words. keep it up.
| Patrician 8/5/08 . chapter 1
What a fresh idea! Very cool, cant wait to see what's going to happen. Glad you're not leaving. )
| team-la-push 8/4/08 . chapter 1
this is really good
| Arlannah3 8/3/08 . chapter 1
OH this story almost made me cry... But what's wrong with her? I can't really tell, or is that the point? But i love this story and i hope she gets better.
| BiteMeSilly 8/3/08 . chapter 1
i love it. it shows emotions in a good way. this way different from the other quil and claire story, but i think it's going to be as good or even better than it. waiting for update.
| hermionejeangrangerweasley 8/3/08 . chapter 1
oh. my. goodness. that was amazingly different from the other quil/claire. It was great, though. wow.
| edene 8/2/08 . chapter 1
OH! I'm excited about this. I like the depth and possibility. I love Quil and Claire. I'm glad you decided to do something different. Its interesting to begin with a death sentence. Even so, its still a beginning so there is so much hope. Will you update often even with BD coming out?
| Hidingsorealpeoplecantfindouta 8/2/08 . chapter 1
Great Chapterness! Good start.
| Lady Alinor 8/1/08 . chapter 1
Good start. I'm anxious to see where this story leads.