Beautiful

Great work, simply great :)

Excellent. Beautifully written.

I like it. Its really well written. It fits with what my friends and I have figured about Setsuna, we know that she was given the position of time guardian when she was young and we always wondered how she might have experienceed things most people take for granted.

The goddess of 'insert element here' is a bit of a 'mouth full' to read.

Aside for that, I liked this story. The characters seemed in character to me, but I especialy liked reading a story almost entierly from Setsuna's point of view. I take it that Michiru was mearly humoring Setsuna (granted in a way that she will probably NEVER tell Haruka about . . .) when she kissed her, but it's still a rather touching moment. This is an enjoyable short read.

Good job!