Nice dramatic place to stop :) This is pretty good so far and I'd read more if you continue this.

Hahahahaha...

THis chapter was so hilarious!
I loved it. Kat is awesome, and Jack is...well...Captain Jack Sparrow as per always.

ahahahah.

Okay, I think I am in love.
Nice job, I love the banter between Jack and Barbossa. Kat is cool too.

*sputter*

Hahahahaha, comandeer the Black Pearl indeed!
Have fun with that Captain Kat Sparrow!

funny ending.

Okay.

I am kinda feeling around, the OC part makes me nervous.
I have had some bad experiences.
However, I want to let you know that this was good proglogue.
You write well.

I shall alos continue, the fact that you included two pirate lords is rather interesting and I want to see what you do with them.

I do caution you to keep the POTC characters forfront and center.

ta,

Professor know It All

It's good enough to keep me reading!! I hope you finish the story, sounds good

I think jack and Kat are related!

This was great. For the one reason that you used my sisters name for the little girl, both the long and short versions. But, my sis spells it differently.

Um...I shall reserve judgment to see if the girl becomes a Marry Sue. Please don't let that happen!

Normally, I'm not big on the girl-goes-to-sea-to-seek-her-pirate-father-fics, but the summary really caught my eye and I had to take a peek. This is very good so far! Please update soon!