 bloodyknight85 8/29/08 . chapter 1'The return of the Heroes, i suppose... Must be quite a party over there... But is it really advisable for them to be shown on TV... See what that have landed them into... in the near future...
Gauron is still alive! And there are people who wants him to be alive and kicking... The Xia sisters... I can understand... But there is more... Remember reading about the Bushmaster... Wonder why he is hoping for the terrorist to be alive... What's so good about this crazy guy!'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN! |
 Fortune Hunter 8/11/08 . chapter 1Sorry for the delay in reviewing. I was unbelievably busy these days following my three day trip overseas, more than a week ago.
It's really quite nice to add some villains from Metal Gear Solid and its sequels since they tend to pump up the action. As for Jack Connors, why does he remind me of someone from a Gundum Seed fan fiction?
No matter, it will be quite a show when The Second Raid comes around.
Thanks for the brief explanation of the four character's pasts and a sneak peak of what's to come. |