VERY well written. Good job.

*confused because someone stole the periods in the the first half of the story* where did they go...?

I loved this, it was so cute. I was wondering what the writing was in-between the paragraphs. This was lovely.

Thank you,

Rabid Reader.

if this is a one shot..i dun

must write MORE!XD

and when ever ya do send it to the fallowing email..:)

seya.

Vicky

Good fic! Please update soon. Write new hp/ss fics soon!

That. Was. Gorgeous. Absolutly. Wow.

It's, the way it's written is, it's beautiful. And a songfic, (personally not a fan) but I loved it. The fact that no one else knows (minus sirius) makes it that much more believable.

Thanks for making my day!

Lovely with enough sadness to add a certain piquancy to the whole story.

that is totally gorgeous. Rock on!

*wipes away a tear* ok that was moving, please say there is more.

*sniff* Great fic.

That's so very sweet!

A very well written piece, kinda weird, but well written

That was very good! I haven't read much with this pairing. I have read and written a bit of Harry / Sirius slash, but not Harry / Severus. Very interesting indeed!