lmao this was hilarious XD Keep updating, please. lol "The meat! It burns my eyes!" that was great. Hoping to see more chapters in the future.

It's funny, and it's pretty good. Too bad Illyna didn't pass. Is the bribe to Lucia Soren? Don't know why her parents would be proud of that... Anyway it seems as though you haven't updated in a long time. So please do.

Hey, remember me? Well, why wouldn't you xP

Well, I got the alert for your latest story, and it reminded me of all the other alerts sitting in my inbox, just waiting to be read. You know when this one was from? March 8th. Wow... that's like 7 months ago... man, I feel really bad. But since I don't have any homework (at least I don't think I do...) I decided to catch up on my 100 or something alerts...

Well, you know what I love about this story? It's OOC-ness that makes me laugh. I honestly could never imagine Lucia and Soren yelling at each other and arguing like that in the game. But that's why this is categorized as humor. :D And Bastian 2.0 (or should I say "two point o" xD) was hilarious.

Well, I loved it! ...Even if it was just basically dialogue... But you know, Fire Emblem is dialogue. Game play and dialogue. Okay, I think I've said enough now.

To wrap it up, I'll just say: it was awesomeness! ;)

Mwahahaha that was hilarious, as always!

I wondered why the host decision was detailed out, but Soren snatching the envelope from Lucia made it worth it. He's pretty decently characterized through this whole thing really.

Hm I liked the parts with Leanne's and LUcia's fortunes. (Especially Lucia's.)

And that Skimir thing put a smile on my face. Mweeheehee.

Loved Illyana's talent. Haha nice description with the food shoveling down her throat. I liked how Soren passed her but Leanne's reactions were god.

Having a certain traitor stain the stage with his filthy heart and body was the icing on the cake. Nice. Rather entertaining, especially Leanne's reaction to Ilyana's "talent," Soren and Lucia's future readings, and Danved, er, Devdan. Well done!

Oscar have to cook. Thats his biggest talent. Or surviving Kieran without going crazy.

Ilyana was good and terrifying. If Oscars skill is cooking, she should appear and steal the food, so the jugdes cant try it.

They should throw Devdan/Danved in the pit. Nobody would miss hin, if Skrimir eats him.

perfection as usual though you didnt buzz off the other two thats tolerable.

C'mon, What's taking u so long? hurry up and update, Please! It's a really good fanfic!

Rofl at Geoffrey knitting! XD

Reyson and Rafiel...on leashes...! o.o ...Oliver, you fat, ugly, old...stalker! Dx

Um... Soren Tellius' Simon...? o_o;

I think Soren would most likely vote yes for Ike, no matter what... '

Hehe, Ike fights for his friends. :D *Ike almost kills Bastian* ... O_o'

it was funny

Still pretty good and funny, but it's really hard for me to tell who's speaking. Work on that.

This gave me a couple of good laughs. I like it. But in this chapter, I sometimes couldn't tell who was speaking. Fix that. As well, Geoffrey is awesome! Knitting wasn't a good talent show thing; give him something cool! I named a D&D character after him! He's my second-favorite Crimean, only beaten by Ike. And could you include some more Radiant Dawn characters? I would like that. Well, this is only Chapter 1. Now, to read on!

Ehehe, Bastian 2.0.

'Wow, you might be too overqualified', I love Soren.

Anyways, this is totally hilarious, keep up the good work!

Bastian 2.0! The horror! MINE EYES! THEY BURN!

... Thank god he's gone... :P

hmm bravo ...(thinking intentlly)have you considered kurth?

never mind, your "security" list will be loaded in a few minutes Um I may be a little space for a while we need a new thingy to our other computer this one dosent like fanfiction I guess any way I think you'll enjoy these also any these character are available for any fire emblem stories if needed the list will come rating of danger that they posess.

pleasure doing buisness my condolances for being late.