wow that was beautiful! ive always luved poems that talk about how draco just acts the way he is to cover up his true feelings and stuff like that - awesome poem!! luved it!! keep up the good work!

Wow... I've never been fond of poetry, but I love your poem!

This is a really great poem! I love the intensity built up in the "Fiery hot, icy cold" verse. I think it is extremely well written, especially if it is a result of caffeine. Well done, it is a great piece of writing.

Beautiful. you know that saying, 'Don't quit you day job?' You should quit yours.

I think dis ish a really good poem/song.

how the HELL did this make it all the way to page 46 with only FOUR REVIEWS?! WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH YOU DRACO ANGST READERS OUT THERE?! DID U IGNORE THIS, OR ARE U JUST BLIND?! IT'S ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! *cackles madly* *muse sneaks up behind, tries to take away my jellybeans* *I pounce on them*. gr...

muse who doesn't yet have a name: but u know sugar makes u hyper, and when u r hyper, you get upset easily.

me: quel est ton point?

MWDYHAN: my point is, when u r upset, you tend to go off the deep end. and u insult people.

me: *pops another jellybean*. and proud of it. NEwayz, THIS FIC WAS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! I WAS ESPECIALLY BLOWN AWAY BY THE LINES "Hate,Rage, Satan's sage" AND THE LAST 15 LINES!

this is good, its rough and unpolished- those are the best poems to write if you want to capture feelings. very good.
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*shrieks like a banshee* Mwah! That was so cool! Usually fanfic and poetry don't mesh well but that was so cool! And now I'm repeating myself, so I'll just, er, go 'load up on Draco fics' now.

I agree, very violent and heartfeltish, not sure about the linkin park bit.. but good : )

This is great - a song more than a poem. Very violent and heartfelt, it kinda puts me in mind of something like, uh, Linkin Park. Anyone agree?