Ah, Edmund angst. It brightens one's day considerably.

Oh, this is beautiful! I so love it! Voyage of the Dawn Treader has always been my very favorite Narnia book, and I've always wished we could have seen more of these three in captivity, and this was just brilliant. The narrative, at times, was even faintly Lewis-like, which was lovely. Really, really, well done, Fig. Just love. :]

Oh, and yes, this is Nee (coloredwords from youtube), just so you know. ;]

I liked it a lot. Everyone was in character, and it...I dunno, it...it made sense.

I haven't read the first version, but I think this story was very good. I thought Edmund's reaction to Eustace was very fitting.

Oh. Poor Eddy!! :(

Oh poor Edmund!

Eustace is such a pig sometimes. Especially before he is undragoned.

Nice job. You got all of them in character, and Edmund's speech to Eustace about battle is so moving. So bitter. It was very well done.

Lion be with you,

KC

O.o

Wowness. That was GREAT! I loved his rant! I got so into it that i barely even heard the phone ring next to me!

Wow, i really liked it!! Great job!

Love Bundi

This one is much better than the first. I completely love Ed's speech and Eustace is horrible, but what I would expect for him in VODT.
The writing is excellent.