A very good story. I liked it a lot. You are a amazing writer, and I love Deidara and Naruto so much. Even if I dont want to consider them like a couple I really liked the story 3

Great story. It was cute!

Was a nice read, un :)

haha really i just read this because i was bored... but i ended up really liking it! haha a bit cheesy at the end but still good! :D

that was sweet i think they make a cute couple

I liked it, but the end was sort of...cheesey I suppose is a good word. Anyway you did very well for your first attempt at NaruDeid

That was good. I would like an Ita/Dei. I know a toughy.

-love-

-awesome-

-too cool to describe-

Better than a LOT of ones that i've seen, I LOVED IT!

I think you're pretty good at this. I hope to see more DeiNaru one-shots from you.

Later! *poofs away*

It was a pretty good oneshot with narudei but a little odd. Still it was pretty good and I wouldn't mind reading another one with narudei.

Sakura-chan/tohru-chan

that was good. I liked it.