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Manda's Girl aka Charlie
2008-08-11
ch 1,
abuseHeartbreaking and very awesome.
polrobin
2008-08-06
ch 1,
abuseSweet!

I think it's cool how you and I both, in our post-Continuum fics, had Sam seeing Charlie. LOL, we both even had him have too-long hair, just 'cause it would bug Jack, I think.

Great, great fic, and I love their natural, easy interaction. Super job.

Pol
Redd
2008-08-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it! Very Sam!
Natters
2008-08-04
ch 1,
abusegood fic
MajorSamFan
2008-08-02
ch 1,
abuseOf course, this is Annerb, so it's good. Writes both Sam and Jack true to character as always, and is true to canon.

But ZOMGosh! heartwrenching!
dp
2008-08-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery nice. Sort of sad but nice job.
khindin
2008-08-01
ch 1,
abuseThis was wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing!
mara-anni
2008-08-01
ch 1,
abuseSobbing uncontrollably :(
sync
2008-07-31
ch 1, anon.
abusenice but could you label stories if they are J/S only please?
madaline-7
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is absoulte... and something that could happen. Thank you for filling in the missing peice for me.
JenniferJF
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseWonderfully written and thought out. Thanks :) - Jennifer
IggyMing
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is so beautifully written, and really fills in a gap that was missing in what was otherwise a very entertaining movie. We catch just a brief glimpse of Sam in her new existence, when she buys the Froot Loops-type cereal. Reading in between the lines, you know she's thinking of Jack. But, it's a brief moment, and not fully explored. You've done a perfect job of adding to that picture, and you've described so well how sad and lonely Sam must have been, especially without Jack.
sgkeb
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseRight on "canon" wise. I expected Sam to do something like this, but you have written it poignantly. Thank you!

Your stories never disappoint. You were the first SG1 fanfic author I ever read, and you drew me into the genre.

I await your next SG1 story!
Zoser
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseHow could she not look at what is forbidden to her even though it hurts. In the PTB's attempt to be light and funny at times miss peoples souls.
Nemea
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseThis was definetly missing! I thought they didn't go far enough into what living so restricted in a weird different timeline meant for the characters emotionally. This is a very good addition. You wrote it beautifully and very true to the characters - I felt very much for Sam though I guess Jack couldn'r really react any different with some woman you don't know (and think is dead) kinda confessing her love for you. But oh my - seing the man you love die and then he's alive again, just not really the same guy... Poor, poor Sam!
Great fic!
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