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| Manda's Girl aka Charlie 2008-08-11 ch 1, | abuseHeartbreaking and very awesome. |
| polrobin 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abuseSweet! I think it's cool how you and I both, in our post-Continuum fics, had Sam seeing Charlie. LOL, we both even had him have too-long hair, just 'cause it would bug Jack, I think. Great, great fic, and I love their natural, easy interaction. Super job. Pol |
| Redd 2008-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! Very Sam! |
| Natters 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abusegood fic |
| MajorSamFan 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abuseOf course, this is Annerb, so it's good. Writes both Sam and Jack true to character as always, and is true to canon. But ZOMGosh! heartwrenching! |
| dp 2008-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. Sort of sad but nice job. |
| khindin 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing! |
| mara-anni 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuseSobbing uncontrollably :( |
| sync 2008-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abusenice but could you label stories if they are J/S only please? |
| madaline-7 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is absoulte... and something that could happen. Thank you for filling in the missing peice for me. |
| JenniferJF 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written and thought out. Thanks :) - Jennifer |
| IggyMing 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is so beautifully written, and really fills in a gap that was missing in what was otherwise a very entertaining movie. We catch just a brief glimpse of Sam in her new existence, when she buys the Froot Loops-type cereal. Reading in between the lines, you know she's thinking of Jack. But, it's a brief moment, and not fully explored. You've done a perfect job of adding to that picture, and you've described so well how sad and lonely Sam must have been, especially without Jack. |
| sgkeb 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseRight on "canon" wise. I expected Sam to do something like this, but you have written it poignantly. Thank you! Your stories never disappoint. You were the first SG1 fanfic author I ever read, and you drew me into the genre. I await your next SG1 story! |
| Zoser 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseHow could she not look at what is forbidden to her even though it hurts. In the PTB's attempt to be light and funny at times miss peoples souls. |
| Nemea 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was definetly missing! I thought they didn't go far enough into what living so restricted in a weird different timeline meant for the characters emotionally. This is a very good addition. You wrote it beautifully and very true to the characters - I felt very much for Sam though I guess Jack couldn'r really react any different with some woman you don't know (and think is dead) kinda confessing her love for you. But oh my - seing the man you love die and then he's alive again, just not really the same guy... Poor, poor Sam! Great fic! |