Good Story, I enjoyed it.

Nice little interlude. You've really captured the mood of the movie well- there are a lot of stories that totally take the characters out of character. I know there's an alternate timeline, but they are still fundamentally the same people. You've not done this- your characters work well.

Good story!

Good story :) I've thought about the fact that there is a teenage Charlie alive in Continuum and how that would play out. Good writing and good sense of the characters. Keep it up!

Heartbreaking and very awesome.

Sweet!

I think it's cool how you and I both, in our post-Continuum fics, had Sam seeing Charlie. LOL, we both even had him have too-long hair, just 'cause it would bug Jack, I think.

Great, great fic, and I love their natural, easy interaction. Super job.

Pol

I love it! Very Sam!

good fic

Of course, this is Annerb, so it's good. Writes both Sam and Jack true to character as always, and is true to canon.

But ZOMGosh! heartwrenching!

Very nice. Sort of sad but nice job.

This was wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing!

Sobbing uncontrollably :(

nice but could you label stories if they are J/S only please?

This is absoulte... and something that could happen. Thank you for filling in the missing peice for me.

Wonderfully written and thought out. Thanks :) - Jennifer

This is so beautifully written, and really fills in a gap that was missing in what was otherwise a very entertaining movie. We catch just a brief glimpse of Sam in her new existence, when she buys the Froot Loops-type cereal. Reading in between the lines, you know she's thinking of Jack. But, it's a brief moment, and not fully explored. You've done a perfect job of adding to that picture, and you've described so well how sad and lonely Sam must have been, especially without Jack.