cute!

Hey! really loved ur story!

I suck at sports well some sports and i always end up in like the last 4 :/ tbh i do get picked first if its rounders though :)

Aw... it was a nice one-shot

I used to be picked up last when i was little cuz I was, not fat, but not as skinny as the other girls... and a foot taller XD

Then, because of that I got to the basketball and volleyball team. Needless to say I ended highschool being picked first, or captain! You just have to train hard to be good at almost any sport!

LOVE your stories!

loved it

Brilliant one shot.

"Yes," he said so firmly I couldn't argue. "I would always pick you first Bella. No matter what. Teams or otherwise." - simply adorable. 3

I really love oneshots , especially this one. It just stands out. I LOVED it , it makes me feel like I could soo easily placate myself in Bellas position. THanks :)

i was always picked last aswell... tear... but the basketball thing reminds me of the time that i sentenced to time out... oh yes a 16 year old being told to time out for kicking the basketball in the middle of the game, to be honeset i didn't know that you weren't aloud to kick in basketball, i thought that was a fair argument... apperantly not!

I really liked this story. I could definitely see Edward reacting like that. I like that even though he couldn't read Bella's mind he still knew how she was feeling. Well done!

That was wonderful! :) :D (: :) :) (:

Good story. Wish Edward was there for me when I get picked last. Lol

*sigh* Edward is so sweet!

I know EXACTLY how this feels, because I was always the girl who got picked last too! I was always a completely awkward misfit in gym, just like Bella.

This is one of the things I wish Stephenie had given us in the books: a look at gym class with Edward. Thank you for writing this, and filling that gap. Edward's words are so sweet...I could have used that kind of support. Great job!