very sweet, very edward.

Aww, that's so sweet of Edward. I loved how he noticed her reaction in such detail. Such a good boyfriend ). I can relate totally to how poor Bella feels in gym class, lol.

Oh, wow. I adored that story! It was so sweet! i too am one of those girls who get picked almost last everytime. The only reason im not last last is because I have good friends. I need an edward! He'll make it better!;] Loved the fic.

PERFECT STORY! As always! Your "typos" are so rare! It's SUCH a RELIEF!

hey. im going through Viper003's favourites list and your on it and i totally agree. This story is really good.

Pieceofcake13

Great idea for a fic. All very in character and believable. It's also very well-written. Good job. :-)

Lol, that was cute. And there were a few funny parts in it.

Well I know exactly how that feels. The only time I'm not picked last is when one of my best friends is the captains. Then they just pick me because they don't care that I suck at sports. Thankfully, my days in gym are officially over. for ever. That was a happy day for me. Granted, my gym teacher got a little offended, but come on...no more gym!

Just, by the by, you are my all-time favorite author, and when I'm bored I like to go read and re-read some of your stories, which is what I'm doing now. I also don't always review, but I'm feeling chatty, so if you get a bunch of reviews from me, that would be why. :)

I'm seriously hoping that didn't come off creepy...but if it did, I didn't mean it that way. Honest. I just really love your writing style.

I was not always picked last but most of the time, and deffinatly never first, it just depended on what we were playing that deffinatly never first.

Great job,

TheGreatAli

aww

so cute

aaww, this was so good. i get picked last all the time so i related.

OH... good!

aww this was such a cute chp..its not like edward can come to the rescue every time..real good chp! :)

That story is so cute...i think it's a dream of every girl who really is...not quite that good at sports (like me ;D) to have such an Edward for herself...*sigh*

But most of the time you have to face the ugly reality. It is good to have someone who writes such stories so you can hide a biot from that reality ;D

Cute Cute Cute!