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mannd1068
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
Very cute!

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Im your brand of heroin
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
This was to cute i loved it!!
flipped
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
you have to update this!! and i insist you to write more 1xR stories. you're so good in depicting them. :)
Bloodfire87
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
That was so CUTE! Yube I love it!! Anita is a doll. I can't wait to see what else she gets Heero into with Relena. Hope I get to read more soon!
Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Hey, I dug this story. The idea is genius, and the plot behind it all makes this story VERY fun to read.
You captured Heeros character MASTERFULLY, and you got Relena pretty well too. Nice touch with the neice, thing.
Im fav'ing this story, so update soon.
Wing Zero Alchemist
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
You should have Heero or Relena get a dog and Heero take care of it.

But I definitely want to see Zech's reaction! Hurry please!
Hawkeye Chuui
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
That was so funny! Loved it tons! Can't wait to read more! =)
Maria Esperanza Woodward
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
OMG!
I don't think I have laughed harder, except maybe at your Kingdom Hearts stories. The worst part is...I CAN SEE HIM DOING THAT! (I can also see Zech breaking the latch...so classic!)
DON'T CHANGE THIS STORY! I LOVE IT! KEEP WRITING!
Neo Starangel
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
That was so cute. I suggest Hopscotch, or Duck,Duck, Goose. Those would be interesting scenarios.
tomagirl14
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Haha cute and funny. I loved the ending. I don't think Heero can talk his way out of this and Zechs probably won't let him. It would be fun if Heero was introduced to duck-duck-goose, ring-around-the-rosie, or london bridge. ^^ That would be cute. I'm sure it's a must better alternative than having Heero play house or dress up with Zechs four-year-old daughter.
whyme55577
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Although I hardly read Gundam Wing fics. I can honestly say I wonder were your amazing train of thoughts will lead this story. Keep going!
AnimeGuera
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
This was absolutely adorable!! I loved it. It made me smile and giggle!! Gunpowder smell...yummy.. Anita was so cute, a four year old mispronouncing his name and he not retaliating!! Cute! I loved how you kept him so in character and yet made him fall so easily for a trap with Relena. The ending was beautiful!

As for childhood experiences...hm...first ice cream cone? Shopping? A haircut? (I assume Heero always cut his own hair) hmm...*still thinking* Riding a bicycle (which he might be efficient at..nvm) Getting caught in the rain with Rel? I'm full of ideas! Well..not good ones but great chapter!! If there's more I'd love to read it!! Until next time.

-Animeguera-
Honourable Fool
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Oh! That was so cute! I loved it to death! Oh, poor Heero and his weakness for Peacecraft women! //sighs// Need any suggestions? Ooh! Water guns! And throw Duo into the mix for fun! That would be great! Hee!

Sorry I don't have anything very insightful for this now. //shrugs// It was just real cute! Can't wait for the next one!

TTFN
Fool
jellybean-kitty
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
This is great! Hope you update soon!
WolfCry17
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
Oh my! This was so very cute and amusing! I really enjoyed it, and I hope you write more very soon. It is always adorable and down right hilarious whenever Heero is confused, especially of simply things! Loved it!
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