NICE.

I like this story alot. The style is simple, clean, and strong at the same time. It also is very drawing, I originaly wanted to read about it becuase I thought it would tell about Mewtwo. But I kept on reading because it was engaging all the same.

I don't have very many ideas, at least, not any that strike as very original. A full out attack or raids. The lab refugees could take care of those; they probably are angry enough to want to do it, but wary enough to not be reckless. The full out attack...I figure that, the way Promise spoke of it, the Pokemon want the lab, and its humans gone, so they might help as well.

The Promise-Solei thing...I don't know, it seems too fast for me. I've read your other stories, and the way I see it is that those are more natural. Either it doesn't really need to be said; like the way Kat and Kaf seem to be, or it has lots of hurdels..like how Sond has at least four boys after her. But maybe it's becuase we're humans and need to complicate things whereas Pokemon don't.

I do have questions...like what is going to happen with the Articuno feather...and Is the scientist's little team Team Rocket, an offshoot, or something else entirely?

I keep on expecting Ash and the gang to show up...I don't know why, you seem to be focusing on the Pokemon and how they see the world aroung them. But I still keep on waiting... too much Saturday cartoon Pokemon I guess..

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Very good! Please write more soon :)

Hey! Great story you've got here. I'm glad to know I'm not the only teen who likes Pokemon. Keep writing please, I'd like to see how this story comes out! Bye!

o...cool i like dis story u must update soon. Constructive Critisicm: u put the word 'totally' where it doesn't belong, like its slang oh well no biggie. update plz!

Oh, Wow! What a great story, please keep writing!

How can you only have 10 reviews? This is a great fic! Keep writing! _

Aww... pretty... _ What's it with the 'Cuno feather? Keep on writing!

Hi, I think this is a good story so far. Very intresting. But i don't under stand one thing. After Pikablu escaped he yelled at the trackers and they semed to under stand. (I think it hapend in the Pricwl.)

Hey, great! More Promise, k? _ I hope he gets his lady-love. And Strange One gan blast some sopid humans! _ Articuno feather, too... interesting...

great, i'd love to see you write more!

Cool! I hope you continue this. Strange one curtainally is in trouble... nothing he can't handle though. But promise... KEEP PROMISE! _ Meeza lika burakki! *_*

Hey, I think your story is really good... I'm rooting for Strange One and Promise... I'll be looking for more chapters :)

Hey Wow! This is great! Plese, for the sake of sanity, keep writing!

I like this... very nice. I don't usually read non-trainer based Pokemon fics, but your plea in the summary drew me in.

Being fifteen and male, it's kinda weird to be admitting to liking this fic, it being a cute little pokemon fic and all, but I do. I'd really love to see more of your story.

Please keep writing more...

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Your story is awesome! You should keep going. I wanna know what happens to little pikablu next! Keep up the good work!