I'm loving this so far, the way you've crafted the relationship and the emotional turmoil Gohan's going through. The subtleness is captivating and I absolutely adore what you've done with the characters.
Can't wait to read more, but don't rush it!
Thanks for the great read so far!

Ahh, this story is so amazing =D
I would attempt to list everything I enjoy about it, but that would cover most of the fic '^_^
The last two chapters have been a bit confusing, but I've enjoyed them nonetheless. Update soon!

I'm ready for a good Gohan and Piccolo story and I am hoping this is it. The plot sounds interesting and I like where you are going so far. I did however notice spelling mistakes through out this chapter.

Interesting story; I cannot wait to read more.

OMG PLEASE UPDATE.
XD

oh, uke!Piccolo.
:D
interesting.
XD

holy crap.
O_o
most surprising chapter eva.
:3

Wow great chapter even if it was a mini one! I can't wait to read more ^-^

I always thought Piccolo would be the dominant one in the relationship and Gohan would be on bottom since he's such a pacifist but it could be the other way around since Gohan would have more experience with what to do in a relationship even if he screws up and Piccolo would be confused, uncertain more as to what to do since he's never felt romantic feelings before.

o-o...


omfg piccolo's on the BOTTOM...?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!! ...
omfgomfgomfgomfg;;
I... I thought piccolo would be topping...

hey, this is really good so far! Piccolo is one of my favourite characters (after Vegeta, of course xD), and I'm glad there's such a good story about him, and Gohan!! :D I never thought that I would like such a pairing, but your writing style is really good! None of the characters seem OOC! :D lol... But Gohan seems to puke half the time he's narrating lolz! o-o

So, Piccolo does have feelings for Gohan but feels its unnatural?

This is good. I hope Pan can make up with her dad though.

Well, I just had fun rereading chapters 5, 6, and 7. I really like how you write Gohan's confused emotions involving Videl and that one sentence where she leaves a note for him on the OJ. There's something very believable about it. As for chapter 7, hm. Did Gohan get too rough and Piccolo died? I'm sure I'm way off track, though. I'm also trying to figure out where the part involving your other story is? Maybe you haven't put in a reference to it yet. Anyways, good job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I liked this chapter very much and I "think" I know what going on. Can`t wait for the next one