I bet not many reviewer say this but ... I almost wish for shorter chapters so that we would be at like chapter 12 or 18 now and that you posted them like every 3 weeks that way by this time you would have hopefully had time to write more and be posting them now so that we did not have such a long wait.
It has been over a year and now I am getting sad. You are taking this a different way but with the same senerios or similar ones at least and that is a good thing at least for this story. Well hopefull soon you will have a lot more chapters done very soon if not all of them so they can be posted and read by us readers that are waiting patiently ok well that does not apply to me but I am sure there are some out there lol.

Anyways take care and hopefully update before the new year.
Des

This gets better each chapter, although I confess to wishing Harry and Hermione would have confronted Ron about their relationship instead of hiding/putting it on hold.
And then MoRon decides he's not going to risk injuring, much less killing the deeters they are going to encounter? IS HE OUT OF HIS FRACKEN MIND??! And Harry and Hermione are fine with that attitude?

Dear Lord, they are going to commit suicide like this! Unless they dump MoRon and get war-minded fast.

But anywho, I really am enjoying this since I ran across your profile via a recon CaerAzkban's message board; keep up the excellent work...just work faster!

Nice, a bit long-winded and I'm certainly no fan of anything past Book IV (even that's stretching it; Harry begins with lots of Awesome, continues with Awesome, and ends up with... Love and hugs all around? Fuck that shit!), but this is a fair shot better than the original. Keep it up.

Um... Gonna update some time? It's good - pity if it'd been abandoned.

Good story! Please check for type errors. You are getting much better because you have less of them. Reread your chapter before submitting and you will spot your errors. I tend to forget myself. Please update! I don't want to see this story just linger and never continue. I finally find the Deathly Hallows like it should have been written. Thank you so much. I wanted to do a remake of the Deathly Hallows but I'm scared too since there are people out there that give flame reviews because it will make them laugh. Don't let those reviews get you down, keep writing because you are good at it. Just keep in mind to check for type errors. Thanks for great six chapters and I am eagerly waiting for the update.

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Do you ever update!

nice story... please continue the story... can't wait to see what will happen to the story

THAT WAS AMAZING! I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!

I am enjoying your story. I look forward to future installments. Thanks for writing. W.

Very nice

hmm just as i said its just like DH all you have done is change pairings and a word here and there. thats just short of plagarism

actually this is way to similar to DH which was beyond stupid. For 1 there was absolutely no reason for Dumbledores portrait to have told snape the date and told him to tell Voldemort. And your harry is just as wimpy in my opinion as well.

I have been reading your story since about a month ago, and you had no updates since then and your last update on the Harry and Hermione The way it should be was way before that, so I thought it was one of those stories that was never going to be finished, so thank you for updating, it is a fantastic story and I am a huge harmony fan fic reader and I urge you to please update soon, please don't let me down like so many other writers on these sites do :)

Great chapter! Way to go!