 loretta537 2009-03-31 . chapter 3these are some good oneshts |
 RoTw 2008-11-14 . chapter 3Woah.. I like the pairing is good :D
RoTw Bokineta #6 Was Here! xD |
 Kaori Minamino 2008-11-11 . chapter 3Darn it Shizuru!!
She was doing so well until then!!
That's it! Story alert! I need to know how this ends. Good job, you hooked me. I'll see you on the flip side. |
 thoth-moon 2008-08-12 . chapter 2Ah, I really liked the theme for this chapter. Your first two paragraphs were excellently descriptive and I liked the little exchange between them when she called him on his ki BS. I did see two--three, technically--typos: in the first sentence of the third paragraph you have Kurama standing on "think grass," and toward the end Shizuru tells him that life "must be livedforwards"--the same lack of space also repeated in the quote at the bottom. This doesn't take away from the chapter or anything (it is a VERY good chapter), but I thought I'd point it out for you. |
 One Watches 2008-08-12 . chapter 2i really like this! its different and good. |
 YusukiShredder 2008-08-09 . chapter 2*appluads* Wonderful! Fabulous! I loved it! What a wonderful quote! Lol, Shizuru managed to sneak up on Kurama XD |
 crazykk2 2008-08-05 . chapter 1Awe, that was sweet. |
 YusukiShredder 2008-08-02 . chapter 1AW! Please oh please oh please (after four hours of me repeating that) OH PLEASE do more! That was a wonderful first drabble, PLEASE do more! I liek it SO much, I LOVE it!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter/drabble, Yusuki |
 thoth-moon 2008-07-31 . chapter 1You know, this is like the one het pairing with Kurama that I can generally approve of without applying much scrutiny. The idea's a good one--we don't frequently see this pairing, or at least I don't--and this first installment was very well-written. I look forward to its continuation. |