|Reviews for Not Right|
| tewak 1/31/10 . chapter 1
i'm speechless. all your stories are so deep and have this feel to them, that i can't describe.
this was sad. but also happy, in a way.
love it. and all your other works.
| Versace Frolic 11/6/08 . chapter 1
Fucking BEAUTIFUL. I would pick a line to quote, but the prose is so tight and succinct I'd end up quoting the whole gorgeous thing.
The sparsity of explanation is like... the Hegelian concept of encyclopedia, which sounds insane, but mostly what it means is that there is an organic transitioning between things, and it has no beginning and no end, but IS. My favorite part of Hemingwayesque elision is how there is so much MORE than is being said, as if we have only the outlines of something vast and sweeping.
This reminds me of the fist KH fic I wrote, How To Disappear Completely, but with all the bullshit cut away. It is softer, sadder, and hits more profoundly.
(Also, thank you for adding A Lesser Beauty as a favorite. I always peek at the profiles of people who add or alert, and I'm glad someone capable of writing something as beautiful as this can find something worthwhile in what I write.)
| Stormbringer246 8/3/08 . chapter 1
Wow. That's the only coherent thought in my head. Wow. And that basically sums it all up. Mind, it's 4:48 in the morning. But still, wow. I loved this (and, as I've noticed, all the other stuff you've written)
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| persephassax 7/31/08 . chapter 1
This was unbelievably amazing. But then again, no less than I expected from you. :)
It just... *loss of words* It was sad, and sad, and happy in a way. And good. Very good.
Sorry for the utter lameness of this review, but amazingness first thing in the morning kills my brain.
I was curious about the line before the first piece of the story. It was admittedly some how completely appropriate, but I wasn't sure quite how it fit in. Just wondering.
Job very well done.
| Static Lull 7/31/08 . chapter 1
This was brilliant in too many ways.
I love how Roxas has his memories and his dreams and Sora's memories, and can't quite tell one apart from the other. I like you're Axel- it's something I can't quite put my finger on, but he really pops, ya'know?
And the way the ending just hangs there; it's really poignant.