Good chapter. Just when things start getting good a psycho had a bullet with your name on it, literally.

the hell is wrong weirdo, you know I almost suspect that he's either Ovan or Sakaki.

I noticed this fic just recently, and it seems pretty interesting. I hope you don't plan on not writing anymore. I'll be hoping for it. I'm also curious about how and when Blackrose and Kite enter the picture.

This is good but when are Kite and Blackrose going to show up?

whoa man that's a very good story. you have to update soon.

i thoroughly liked this.however you can take thsi so much further i realize...for instance,you could have those 3 guys from cvhapter 5 try to gang up on alkaid/chika in the real world beofre school and haseo/ryou could kick their asses.XD

then take it more into their relationship form their...aka...o.o

sex makes babies?(surprise*)

tis awesome!

A bit rushed... but since I am a sucker for Alkaid stories I will follow this.

Good update. It should be interesting to see how everyone comes together.

Not a bad fic, shows quite a lot of promise. However, it seems rather rushed overall. Not in the sense of "you wrote this really fast" but that you're hitting all the major plot points too quickly. Personally, I think it'd be better if you slowed things down and fleshed everything out a bit more.

But there's no doubt, I like this and I'll see if you've written anything else after I post this.

I enjoyed this chapter. But, I would recomend... ugh... too sleepy to give a coherant analysis or response to this chapter. Itwas good, okay? thats about as good as I can do... damn sleep meds.

Hey that was good for a rushed chapter, anyway it might be a good idea if the storyline had some problems both in the real world and the online world regarding their relationship. It would be a bit interesting if those two problems linked.

I know you might have thought of it but I'm just saying here it would be interesting.

P.S

You can ignore this comment if you like. I am not implying anything and this fanfic has been good so far.

Sincerley

Bystander

Nice chapter.

Cute family scene.

Good. I'd write more if there was more to read.