Man, you should continue this!

aw...
i loved it!
i have no other words, but that...
i think i am actually going to re-read this for a long time :)

OMG YOU SO NEED TO WRITE A WHOLE FANFIC WITH THIS COUPLE!
They're so cute together.

Very cute scene. =) I think you managed to portray their mannerisms very well. It's consistent with how they act and think in the movie. Well done!