Interesting. You captured Kuwabara's character perfectly, not many writers can do that. However, Yukina and Hiei's speech patterns weren't quite in character. (For example, the name suffixes. Yukina addresses Hiei as Hiei-san not Hiei-sama, in the original japanese.) And the title could use some improvement but otherwise it's an enjoyable, dramatic fic.

aww, how sweet. Hiei's cute when he's scared. lol, I was expecting him to hide behind Yukina or something, lol.

That was beyond good.
You did an excellent job.
xD
I can tell why its one of your favies.

YAY! Awesome job! I loved the ending!
-D101