The progression of the fic was a little rushed. I think it might have done better as a multi-fic, but it was still pretty good.

Oh what a cute little story. I liked it :)

So good!

Love it! XD The ending is so sweet!

oh i totally loved that ending!

aw that was so sweet and cute i loved it!

*sniffles* Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. 8,D

short sweet and to the point. i liked it. esp the coral poisening, did u already know that or did u look it up for the story?
nice take on the 'discovering each others' identities' story bit.
ja ne

i loved it! its one of my faves!

~Serindraxx~

hehehe cool

This is just so sweet and cute. How do I put this all in one word? Oh I know, KAWAII!

Aw that was really sweet!! I really enjoyed it! Are you continuing it? I hope so! :0)

AW

you are a gifted writer...i got caught in the moment and didn't want it to end...will be waitting for the next chapter.

great story i love it.