Temptation was good I wish there was more! Nice writing, great 1-shot !!

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Haha, suggestive indeed. But that's to be expected from Kakashi. That pervert :)

I loved this fic. Their thoughts were hilarious. There's nothing more amusing to read than denial :)
Both of then were very in-character and you built up their growing feelings very realistically.

I do hope that you decide to write more KakaHina fics.

The kiss and the detail of it makes it just a LITTLE more than K+...
good descriptions.
you're the first author that i know of who has more than 95% correct grammar and spelling. good job! :D
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i know its kinda sill idea but wouldnt it be funny if like naruto or kiba or some one walked in on them some where lol it was just an idea

funny, sweet and cute!

Great two chapters. A narutoxhinataxkiba story all roll into one.

PLEASE continue. I absolutlely love Hinata with anybody, and your stories make me all warm and fuzzy.

So sweet. Nice job.

How sweet!

This is so sweet! I loved it! Please update soon!