Oh my. Shadow LIED! But why? And poor Speedy, snatched away! What shall befall him?

It's okay, a chapter can be short but still good. In any case, keep writing. Any new author needs support, especially here on .

Listen. I reviewed thisabout four hours ago, but i'm desperate. Get chapter three on here ASAP or I will use the most deadly torture on you known to man and alien kind... NANI'S OATMEAL! You have been warned D: Well, have a nice day!

Hey! Not bad! I do hope you make more chapters, you have no idea how much I love Lilo and Stitch fight for survivel stories. As long as the survivor is a fan charecter, I mean, can you honestly picture Reuben or Heckler in that sort of situation? But anyways... Nice work!

I like it! Can't wait for the next chptr.

although it was short but it was still very good =) can't wait for the next chapter. =D

A good start and your english isn't so bad.

Perhabs I say it because I live Germany too.

Weiter so!

Next chapter soon, please.

Aloha!

I am 123qaz.

I bid you welcome to this section. Come freely, go safely and leave some of your happiness behind.

It seems that you are quite a new author here. The beginning of your fic is maybe a bit short but I have seen a lot worse attempts. This fic holds some potential in it. All you have to do is to make the correct choices. I can see that English isn't your native language. That doesn't matter. Some of the best authors here are not native speakers or should I say writers. You will learn as you write and read fics by other authors.

The world of fanfiction is simple. The name of the game is that when YOU review then YOU get reviewed.

See you soon!

123qaz

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