|Reviews for Flawed Reality|
| allim227 5/19/09 . chapter 32
So obviously I loved this chapter since I stayed up way later than I should just so I could read it! it was fantastic! I'm so glad our Brucas is back together... I can't wait to se what happens when they wake up! I will come at you with a pitch fork if you have Brooke leave again! J/k.. Love ya!
| brookenlucas4eva03 5/19/09 . chapter 32
Wow im speechless n y they dont show dis?
| dolcegrazia 5/19/09 . chapter 32
Great chapter! All of the B/H/R stuff was great. Sexually frustrated Brooke is very amusing. And the reunion between BL was impeccable. I'm glad you updated so fast!
| brucs2gether 5/19/09 . chapter 32
love that u have updated! this chap was great, great work...loved it...love brucas...UD soon pls!
| pink5288 5/19/09 . chapter 32
| xnxdx 5/19/09 . chapter 32
Finally! lol. Loved the new chapter. Brucas getting together has been long-awaited but so worth the wait. I'm so happy you updated!
| tanya2byour21 5/19/09 . chapter 32
I loved loved loved loved loved loved loved the new chapter. I am glad Brooke got over her fear and went to Lucas. And I am glad they are gaving a little boy. I loved it. and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great writing and please post more soon.
| flipflopgal 5/19/09 . chapter 32
Amazing chap! Love the brucas! Well done!
| Ashley 5/18/09 . chapter 31
I love this story, I thought this chapter was a little short but thats okay. It was still very well written and enertaining. I hope you make them together soon, I love me some brucas!
| Tess-IV 5/18/09 . chapter 31
I'm up to date, well at least with your story, I most tell that for a moment or maybe two I wanted to slap Brooke hehe sorry about that but, she want to be with Luke! but I don't see her doing anything and I mean anything!, not even a kiss?. I thought they'll be dating just living in their own houses, but I guess I was wrong; what happened with the dates on Fridays?, I don't know where you are going with this, maybe is just what Brooke need to finally be with Lucas I mean fully being with him, well I don't really know, and where Hadley? I love the interaction between her a Brooke.
Well I'm sorry if this comment was practically all complaining but just let me assure you I like it ok? I really did but it just create me all that questions, anyway hope you put the next soon, have a great week.
| Tess-IV 5/18/09 . chapter 30
Well as told in the last one I'm catching up with my reading.
I was totally unaware of what Brooke was thinking, being scare of the relationship with Luke ok but I didn't expected that bad, an specially that she is scared of telling Lucas and ending like their parents, but I guess being pregnant is not helping here with all her fears and issues they have.
Let me tell you that I was having doubts and wasn't sure that they will go through the conversation without yelling or fighting, so I guess even if they have issues they already made progress by talking and expressing what they feel without getting mad at each other.
I'm not sure where are you taking the story by putting them apart, well sort of, maybe they'll date like they where 7 years ago, or maybe they'll realize mainly Brooke that they can make it, and I know your not changing the fact that they will end together, like MS, so I'm going along with the way you taking the story.
Good chapter in case my comment it's not clear about if I like the chapter or not. Take care
| NCISxBonesxOTH 5/18/09 . chapter 31
I'm still reading! and i think its mean that you have brooke knowing what she's having...and not me! lol...though i think she should be having a boy...but thats just my opinion ) and really...BL need to be back to their normal gooey coupleness...lol. sorry about the rambling i have been up since 4:45 am so i'm a bit tired lol
| Tess-IV 5/18/09 . chapter 29
Now I'm the one that is sorry, I'm really behind in the reading, but I'm going to continue and of course giving comments even if they are late and short.
Ok so here we go, I would be insecure if I was in Brooke's shoes, so it's good that after all she's just not so afraid and that Luke is doing what he can to help her overcome here fears.
Hadley was so entertained coloring and then asking where they were going and if they loved her, because she was not going with them, and asking Brooke very serious with the pinky swear, soo cute, I love that girl you create there and the relationship she has with Brooke.
The every Friday date was a good talking between them until the second to Peyton comment that put them in uncomfortable silence, until they said sorry and it's ok, and of course they kissed, I think that was credible but I think they have totally leave Hadley for the night, even if it was just for more conversation haha so that's it for this one.
| ok 5/18/09 . chapter 31
please update soon. i wanna know the gender of the baby!
| pink5288 5/18/09 . chapter 31
I can't wait for BRUCAS to get back together! ] Continue!