I love This! Pride and Prejudiceis one on my favorite books. Are you going to update, or is this abandoned?

Quite interesting. I noticed the date of when it was published and I was slightly disappointed if only because it's been a while and I do not quite know if that is because you have given up on this piece of work. Despite that, I'll be putting this on my alert list, just in case.

Hope you haven't dropped this fic and waiting to see how this goes (has great potential), thank you!

Oh!
Write some more of this one!
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Actually (and I'm NOT saying this just to be contrary) I didn't find this confusing at all. Odd, perhaps, but VERY intelligent.

I could never write like this, as I'm sure you know, so I am terribly impressed by your ability to mimic the style of that time. You are doing an excellent job and needn't change a thing.

Something inside me still goes NO whenever I come across mpreg, but this IS a magical society and it's not THAT unlikely that they (if the need called for it) would device some way for two men to have a biological child, so I really don't mind.

I'm looking forward to seeing this story unfold, though I feel for Peter if his destiny is to be that of Charlotte (that IS the Pride and Prejudice characters name, right?). I've always had a huge soft spot for that girl. Anyway, good luck!

Mwahaha! Das crossover fanfic of DOM! Me like it. And you better make sure that you continue on this one or I'll make sure that you will suffer!

I think that you have broken my brain. I'm trying so hard to understand and I cannot quite manage it, and yet I am also more interested than I have been in a vary long time. I don't know how you'll take this, but no offense was intended

terrific.

i think this is one of the most interesting ideas i've ever seen on this site (especially i'm enjoying how you show lily) and i can't wait to see what happens next!

Well this is cetainly different, but, so far, I find myself enjoying it. I've never read Pride and Prejudice, never even seen the movie, but I'm sure it won't detract from enjoying your story.

This is very, very strange, but so far I think it is in a good way. I'm keeping up well (the mark of good writing with a story this complex) and am interested to see where you take it. Will be checking back on it.