Only problem that came up was that 151 and 152 were the same chapter.

The suspence is killing have the Wolves take down the NID, and when they do it please have that chapter be long, detailed, and NOT broken up into cliff hangers. I don't thank I could handle to many cliff hangers when it happens you have buildt it up too nicely.

The commandos are idiots!
The Shields would no doubt be of Ancient/Asgard design. As such, anyone sitting in the City Control Chair has full access to any such tech in the city's environs. As such, anyone sitting there can turn the shields off with a thought.
Speaking of which, I noted none of the commandos had secured that place. I bet Buffy/Faith has a ATA-gene'd member of their people sitting in it, watching the whole thing - sort of like MTAC in NCIS

wow, three chapters in under 12 hours. wicked. thanx for writing so quickly, i cant wait to see what happens next.

stopping by to say how much I am enjoying this. Of course all this prep work to the actual attack is making me anxious for it. Good job.

the watcher who was sent to gitmo, what is his name? Gerald Wyncote, Geraldo Wyncote, or Garwood Wyncote? this confused me when i read through it

can't we kill kinsey yet? keep up the good work.

OH MY GAWD,

Can we just have Zelenka kick his butt, I am hanging on string to read how they take it. Also, any chance of the wolves bring in the invaders just as the butt kicking is finished. That above all would give the three Bozos the shock and awe they deserve, and be a pretty good time to arrested the worm Kinsey. Oh well just a thought, by the way I look forward to the alerts that a new chapter is posted so keep up the great work.

Great work. Keep up the good work.

Loved it

Very nice as always. I love Zelenka. And the ending line was PERFECT!

danmit can't we just put these idiots through a chipper. I mean they deserve so much worse.

Nice to have a little levity before all hell breaks loose :)
Can't wait for Kinsey and his goons to tour the place and see what they won't be getting their hands on..
Perhaps the group can take turns with Kinsey and hack him into little pieces?

Ah, things are heating up, here's to a final end to kinsey and his friends, and all who hold his views

If you wanted to consider something which would both deeply push him over the edge and enrage Kinsey, you could point out the utter lack of divine activity and lacking presence of the Christian deity, compared to the Amazon's gods who actively assist their worshippers.

It would be funny to prove conclusively that either Kinsey's God is a weak underpowered demigod barely worthy of the name, or something has usurped the place of kinsey's god for amusement or extra followers- either way that should enrage him utterly

Kinseys pretensious spouting of various forms of beliefs during the show and the character you've continued with can be messed with so easily if you bring that issue into things

I just started reading this story and I really like it so far. I hope to catch up soon so that I can review your newer chapters! Good work!