This was just amazing! I can't think was any other words to describe this. I wish there was more.

Really interesting and really well written. It's not very "in character" I guess, but the concepts and ideas are still fascinating.

just beautiful, i can't think of anything else to say. I loved your characterizations, and how you structured the story. A very realistic Hogwarts-era description of how their relationship might progress.

Wow, that was unbelievably beautiful. At first I thought the expressions were a little out of character. But as the story progressed I just fell in love with your words. It really is very beautiful and poetic.

Kudos.

Lia.

That was very clever. Linking the refrences between the story and fact. The backgound was also tastefully administered- just enough to help the story, without bogging it down. A great piece of writing.

So very good! I like this a lot, really great writing.

beautiful

Nice fic! It was very nicely written! I loved the way you wrote it, it was very interesting. Your use of evocative and emotive language was very well done and added so much substance and meaning behind it all! Well done!

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DreamWeaver

This story is *brilliant*. You are really talented, you have a unique way with words...it seems as if every word in your story is placed exactly where it was intended to be, like there is no space - no matter how small - wasted...ah, I can't describe it (but could be because of my bad English ;))

wow that was good. you had good imagry and wou worked well with your words .

I like the way you ended this. It seems like their relationship could be mocing on to something more. At least that's what I got from it _

Wow. That's all I can say. That was truly amazing. I don't think I've ever read anything s s god, there's no ward. This is going on my favorites, I'm am awestruck. Lauren

::nods slowly:: That was very good. Atmospheric, I'd say.

I love this fic on so many layers... first; I'm a sucker for plays-on-words, even if they're stupid, i like them, but this was done really well; so I love it for two reasons. Then there's the imagery; it's so good. It's beautiful and it explains everything, but it's not 'weighty', i mean- it doesn't use too many words, so it still flows. Then, of course, because it is Harry/Draco, and neither are out of character. I just love the whole thing. I can't really explain why or which bits; the whole atmosphere, and theme and your style; it works perfectly.

Sugoooooi! I love it! Very introspective and everthing! :D :D The history with addiction and drugs and that dreamy quality. *_* I envy yer writing ability. ;x