A great story. Very good.

Nice, nice :) I wish to read more :D

*cries*


no...fluff! fluff is good!in all seriousness, this is beautifully written, i just want happy lmao

Oh gods...that was sad...now that I think about it, I see that Susan would have died if she married Caspian...but she would've been happy while she was alive!

aw... this makes me so sad! lol. I've been reading/watching too many depressing things lately... anyways, it was really interesting for me to see this piece, b/c I wrote Susan's death scene from her perspective and it was cool to see the new spin you put on it. There seem to be a couple errors where you use the wrong word in the wrong place, but besides that nice job.

Oh, how sad... but a beautiful story nonetheless!