You need to keep updateing! It's going great and I want more! And if you want ideas e-mail me! I have tons I dont use!

I liked this chapter. The begining was funny. :D

Great story

lol, I loved the CloudTifa moment! And I hope Yuffie is gonna be okay!

Haha, it is a good song, and yay you finished :) i really liked it

dont worry about updating its not that big of a deal school started its hard i had a lot of stuff too i just updated today and i havent updated since school started because i played tennis and soccer and i had a part time job so i would stay after school for soccer games and every day we didn't have a game we had practice because im on varsity then on mondays and wednesdays i had tennis lessons then i would work from 5 to 7 on all the other days, walk home and have dinner done befor my mom got home at 8 eat do my homework and go to sleepl, andthen make time for friends so i kno what its like trust me

i love it its so cute ☺

I loved this chapter! It was funny! UPDATE!

thanks for the cait sith plushie XD

I won't let u dump it! DUH! BTWs i luved it

Aw this is so cute! I love it. I think in the next part when vincent and yuffie walk back to the group(still holding hands of course) cid should be like "What the f*?!" lol

you must learn to update faster, even though i get it before anybody else... anyhoo update!