UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!

Keep up the good work!

I like it.
Hisoka? As in HunterXHunter? That would be interesting, but he'd more likely be the son of Anko and Hidan.
...Ew.

That was awesome! Please update ;)

aw, i really like this story. it has a very interesting plot line. hope you update again soon.

That was the most awesome Naruto story I have read to date!
PLEASE EXPAND ON THE STORY, THE PLOT IS AMAZINGLY POSSIBLE!

Love how sneaky and manipulative they were. And are going to be.

I have to agree with OnGuard; after that mess with Kumo early in the series, the chance of an alliance would be slim-to-none. Other than that, this is GOLD. 24-Carat Black GOLD. I eagerly await more chapters.

political or no, this would not happen. hyuuga and konaha would not allow another village to gain their bloodline.

sweet, I wonder how many months or years it will take before the idiot is killed by accident?

interesting plot line. it just sucks that naruto and hinata can't publicly be together. would he even get to know his own child? hope they'll end up the happy family they deserve to be.

can't wait to read more. please update soon.

cant wait for the next chapter

Kill 'em all and be done with it already! Khorne demands blood!

impressive idea. I would like to see it unfold further.
GwCE

Yaay! Another Drama from Muishiki! Joy.

Didn't notice any errors or anything. Kinda strange to start with Naruto becoming the Hokage right off as well but... admittedly quite fun. How did he do for his first nine months eh? No powerplays? Nothing significant changed right off?

No wars started due to the similarity between the sixth and the fourth?

Heh heh.

I can't wait for the next chapter of this. I'd read that other new fic you came out with but unfortunately I don't know the series it's crossed into, and this is infinitely more fun anyways.

Ja!

MB

How about Gashira for the last name? That is the last name of the person that tried to kidnap Hinata when she was 3, and I've read some fanfiction where he was the Raikage's brother. It could work if you find nothing else. Nice story. Not too many like this one. I hope ypu make it a little longer then just a few chapters.