A sweet, simple tale. A nice relaxing read for a quite afternoon.

I remeber reading this some time ago. I'm suprised I didn't leave a review then. I apoligize for that. It deserved better treatment then that.

All these years later it's still a fresh bit of work.

Thank you

AWESOME! FIC! I read it before and now I've finally found you again! I can't wait to read anymore fics you have! POST MORE ASAP! I just wanted to add you to my fav list! LOL

Love ya,

Sam

Well, T/R/A Pairings was what I had hoped for, before I considered one thing. Tenchi never wanted to become Emperor! He wanted a Quited life with Occsional excitement. That's what happened in Tenchi Universe, That's what happened in Tenchi in Tokyo. It even happened in Tenchi Forever. He had very high sense of Honor, sure. But Not enough to give away his private life, which will vanquish once he step on the throne.

Well, with that attitude, he's more appropriate to be a police officer, than an Emperor!

Back to another reason why T/R/A doesn't happens easily. He was raised to become a shinto priest, and I don't think that includes Jurai's two-timing outlook. And I think that Ryoko, although can come to love Ayeka as a sister, can never share her man with another. It's not in her nature to do so. Ayeka, however can share. She was raised that way. But we all know that she'll lose in the end anyway. Tenchi couldn't live without his favorite pirate, and we the viewers wouldn't let him! _

I suggest you add another event in which Ryoko came to realization that Tenchi(in this Fic) would never live without Her and Ayeka. And it should be a full fledge event. A high Impact one.

Hope my suggestion helps.

Keep up Writing!

I have started the path to Jurai, and I must say I like what I read. That was an imaginative way to get the girls and Tenchi together, and I liked the use of Urd. I see what Andrew meant in one of his reviews to Odyssey. I also see where some of the things you have sugested for Alchemy come from now as well. A splendid little tale. On to its continuation.

WilliamNichols

i liked that one now for the next one

-One word for you...Perfect-

Different. I haven't been a big fan of stories in which Tenchi chooses multiple stories, but you seem to be the exception. Actually the more I think about it the possibilty is there and might be something to explore as long as it doesn't get really out of control (ie, marrying ALL of the girls as done in some stories). Anywho, great writing!

It is a well written fic, although kind of OOC. You should definetely keep on writing.(Note that I'm kind of not a fan of Tenchi being paired up with more than one person but still i'm trying not to be biased) It was interesting throwing a little Ah My Goddess in there. A couple suggestions: through in a little action with the dialogue. Sometime just plain dialogue can be pretty boring, also, try to keep the other characters in the story (i didn't really see Mihoshi anywhere). Gramatically you were superb, and your content was pretty good. I hope to read some more of your fan fiction!