Ianto's a Time Lord? Wait, what?! That's different! In a very good way. This story was surprising, edgy and wondefully written. Definitely a page turner... er, a next chapter button clicker? o.o

I was quite sad when they aborted their first child, but it was probably for the best. For the child and the parents. It was nice to see that even after all those years they still thought of what could have been. And little Susan, what a doll!

On a sidenote, I really liked your note in chapter six. It is a choice for the parents to makes. You don't have to agree with it or like it, but it's their decision. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I appreciated your explanation. I've never read a story like this and to be forewarned, well, that's always a plus. I didn't want to finish the story because I was worried that it would be sad, but I was so sucked in I just couldn't NOT finish it.

LET ME TELL YOU HOW GLAD I AM THAT I DID FINISH IT. It's just one surprise after another, isn't it? Happy ending's are made of win. You managed to tie up all the loose ends, burry the past, and turn my frown upside down in the last chapter. Once again, pleased to pick their brains and see that they still think about the first pregnancy.

Alrighty, I'm done. Thanks for posting!

Lovely story! I was a bit disappointed when they aborted their first child, but I understand and actually think they made the right choice. I do like that they are still together after all those years and having more children. Thanks for the story. Keep up the great work!

I really enjoyed this fic :D

It was a great story. You did really good with this. I'm still new to Torchwood and Jack/Ianto, but I liked it. =)

i hav luvd this fic ! your a brill writer!

i luved this fic it was brilliant i can deffinatly see where you are cumin from and i think it was written beuitifully!

I really really liked that. Mostly because no one ever writes about people getting abortions. I had one about 4 years ago and I like the way you handled it. Kinda made me want to cry but I've watched Journey's End and had an argument with my husband today so I've cried enough. Thank you for a great story where someone who had an abortion wasn't the bad guy.

Just read the story from the beginning till the end. I just have to say, that I loved it. I love the detail and the storyline. This will definitely be going down as one of my favorite stories. Thank you for sharing this with us, and keeping my bored self busy. :)

Ah...just read all this fic and I love it!