Did I need to say I loved your work? Hm... one more time will not hurt :-) And again, and again :D Normally I don't care for Genesis/Angeal pairing, because in my view of things Angeal is straight, and on top of that to me stories lack something when they have no Sephiroth in them. You know, he's my favorite ever :) But yours are always awesome, and seeing Genesis as a Lucifer is just perfect. That is how I always saw him, devious, cunning, cruel, and craving for knowledge, yet at the same time
so very human, hatred being the carefully chosen mask not to hurt.
I loved the depth and the beauty in it, as always. And tragedy. And one line that I found extremely appealing:
"...because if there was no hope to turn the wheel of fate back, then there was no hope anymore, except in becoming the wheel and being the one who crushes those in the way."
I wonder how does the silver-haired angel fit there? ^_^
Hugs,
~SLoveless.
PS. Somehow I always end up bubbling like hell when thinking about your works, which is the best thing I ever wanted (not the bubbling part, but thinking I mean :P).

Gwah! It's even more effective the 3rd time round! DAMN YE! DAMN YE I SAY! Genesis/Angeal... words needs more...

Oh...That makes me sad...

It was beautiful, making up for the usage of the bible (I find the Christians quite a pain) by the beautiful ways you used those passages. That was an extremely well-written fic, and is going on my favorites so that it may make me sad many times in the future.

Well done.

...O_o...WOW. That was... *blinks* It was so BEAUTIFUL! Homg. Such poetic, pretty language this was in!! Srsly, this was gorgeous lol, you fitted those lines from the Bible in the text really well (I never read the bible, so if you hadn't said they weren't from it I'd just think you were being really creative! XD ) and I loved as your similes and metaphors and stuff, I always love comparisions in stories. This was excellent and the way you described Genesis and how Angeal is obviously hurt by what's he's become is SO realistc. Only thing to point out, White Banora apples are purple!! XD Anyway, BRAVO!! to you, and DO keep writing more with them, you are SO GREAT at doing it! TOTAL FAV. :D

wow, this is amazing, beautifully written and so poetic, very sad... you have no idea how much i envy your writing skills.