That was crazy, but I lOVED IT! I LOVE GAAV AND LINA PAIRINGS! I am so glad you updated because it's been forever. I hope you update soon! LOVE IT!

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! If you haven't already, look up and read the Fanfic "Shards of Chaos" written by Dust Traveler and illustrated by Amethyst Angel. It isn't here at you need to go to Amethyst Angel's site and find the link to the story. She is at . You might get inspired to finish this story!

This has a lot of potential, I hope you can finish it some day soon!

I love it please continue! Please! Please! Please

This is great!Please write up date soon.

Great story. It probably the best gavv/ lina story. I encourage you to wite more.

Lina and Gaav? O_o That is weird. *has a tape with all of Amelia's justice speeches on it and Naga's laugh in between each speech (heh. That rhymed! I'm a poet and I didn't even know it ; don't mind me)* And if you don't continue, *straps you down to a chair with a comp in front of you and a tv with the tape in it* And I have the remote, so don't even think about it.

This good! Continue it! CONTINUE IT!

Oh wow, this is SOOO cool! Did our Xelly-chan get called because his mistress heard what he had said? Oooo so interesting, I'm sure this could and quite possibly would/will get very interesting. And having Gaav possesive over her, cute. Gee, I wonder why he could want HER as his queen (oozes sarcasm) aside from her nightmare magic. I hope you don't turn her Mazoku, that would drastically change things, and it'd be a bit more amusing with the Mazoku/human relationship... I can just imagine HER the human, having the upper hand in THIS joining... If he lives through it that is. *grins* write the next chapter soooon I'm dying to read more!

Write mooooooore PLEASE! I wonder why Xel's master was calling him...*ponders*

Please continue...I want to read more...please!

come on finish it pllllease!(I hope its a L/P or X/L lol)_

Um I don't get whats going one,its comfusing!

Wow, very interesting story and scenario. I've always liked stuff that involves the plots and plans of the mazoku... _

Weird pairing, weird. But it could work, right more ... I'm dying of curiousity!

Write the next chapter soon please! _ I like it a lot! Gaav annd Phibbrizzo back! O_O;