 Neros Urameshi 2008-12-05 . chapter 23How sweet. Now Sky and his gang became allies. Wonderful!
But that Margaret seriously needs to go, and I say Vector needs to divorce her.
Still, great story! I love it! Another great Shadow & the Chaotix episode fic! |
 Neros Urameshi 2008-12-05 . chapter 22Now everything is back to normal, and everyone is back at the Chaotix. Wonderful! |
 Rock Raider 2008-12-04 . chapter 23Aside from Margaret liking seeing Midnight hurt, this was a good way to end the story. Plus, here's a tip for Shadow. Next time Margaret makes you get her a milkshake, pee in it.;) Also, looking forward to Mobius Massacre. Hope to see it up soon. See ya next fic! |
 Shannen M. 11 2008-12-04 . chapter 23A very swell ending. I laughed when Margaret punched Midnight. Poor guy.
Oh, and thanks for letting me use her in my story.
Did you review that, yet? |
 Rock Raider 2008-12-03 . chapter 22Wow, Shadow sure is a glutton for punishment.:) Also, I noticed in your A/N that you apparently have Margaret staying at the Chaotix when Vector should take back his job. I imagine there might be a few changes, including what I assume to be the layoffs of employees Margaret feels that the Chaotix can do without, & I am referring to Shadow & Espio.XD Then again, I dunno. Hope Vector gets his job back. Update soon. |
 Neros Urameshi 2008-12-03 . chapter 21The mission is over? Well, thank goodness Shadow's okay. But what about Charmy? Please let him be all right!
Continue on! |
 Nazo The Ace 2008-12-02 . chapter 21girl, u really are taking a hail mary with this fast typing (good). keep IT UP yesh exelency |
 Shannen M. 11 2008-12-02 . chapter 21Wow. Nice job.
And I hope Charmy's alive 'cause in my story, I made Salley kill him. I didn't mean to do it. She couldn't control her thirst for blood. Yes, she's a vampire too. |
 Rock Raider 2008-12-02 . chapter 21Feels unfinished, maybe in the sense that we've yet to see Charmy & Zeak. Come to think of it, they've been absent from the fic since their battle. Maybe the next chapter can catch up up on that. I feel there may still be some animosity between Kuroi & Tonya for what happened with Kuroi's ex, but yeah. I STILL think Ace would be a good choice for Kuroi, but I guess I'm kinda pushing that.^^; Anyway, it's interesting that Sky was raised by Kiba. I guess he may retain SOME iota of respect for Kiba, though the others of his team may not. Also, I'd say some apoligies are in order from The Silver Fangs, but it feels pointless to say that now. Still, The Silver Fangs owe it to the Chaotix for what they had put htem through. Well, anyway, update soon. |
 Shannen M. 11 2008-12-01 . chapter 20OMG. She couldn't have kids because Kiba punched her so hard in the stomach?
Well, keep this up. |
 Rock Raider 2008-12-01 . chapter 20Woah, Margaret can't havekids because of Kiba? THAT I did NOT see coming. Needless to say, it looks like Margaret's gonna mash him into paste. To tell you the truth, as early as the previous fic, I always had visions of her pounding Kiba for the trouble he's caused, as well as while doing so, shouting a bunch of really mean misandric stuff, & listing the things she hates about men. What do you think? Also, I bet the Silver Fangs Detective Team will probably disband because of a loss of respect for their leader. Unless they just decide to make Sky their leader instead, due to him being Kiba's best guy. What would you think would work best? Well, anyway, update soon. |
 Rock Raider 2008-11-30 . chapter 19Called it. Margaret IS the reason behind this, & Kiba wants to get back at Vector by destroying his team. You know, I bet if the other Silver Fangs found this out, they'd realize how wrong they were, apoligize to the Chaotix for all the trouble they caused, & lose all trust & respect for Kiba they have. I wonder what he told them to make them think the Chaotix were evil. Think we'll find out, wouldn't you think so? Well, anyway, update soon. |
 Shannen M. 11 2008-11-30 . chapter 19I knew it. Kiba did like Margaret. Funny stuff.
Check out Ch. 4 of "YL..." |
 Neros Urameshi 2008-11-30 . chapter 19Sky was still on our side and he tried to help Rouge all along? Wow... That's unexpected.
Please continue! |
 Bloodrayne666 2008-11-30 . chapter 19Wow! Drama heats up! wow! I wouldn't want to mess with Margreat!
If she and Vector hadn't shown up in time, Rouge would have had her brains blown out!
Greatly written! Keep up the great work! |