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Erroneously
2009-03-09 . chapter 12
I really like the ending to this, and the way you portray how much Yuuri's grown :D
HaruLuLu
2009-02-19 . chapter 4
OH NOES D8 D8 D8
HaruLuLu
2009-02-19 . chapter 3
So Swet
HaruLuLu
2009-02-19 . chapter 2
EPICNESS D8
HaruLuLu
2009-02-19 . chapter 1
I love ConYuu
kayura sanada
2009-02-01 . chapter 12
Ah, I love your stories. Screw just faving the story, I'm faving you, too. Your characters never deviate from their original personalities and your storylines don't make me feel like they were pulled from various odd parts of your anatomy. ^__^ I love your stories! But I think I already said that.

Oh, but I do wanna say that when you're editing your stories, you may want to double-check the sentence structure. I think you went through some sentences and altered them and then forgot to check the entire sentence to see if everything still matched together correctly. ^_^ Don't get me wrong; I don't want to even try to count all the typos I've had in my stories (just the thought makes me shudder), but it was really the only thing I could see wrong in the sentence structure level.

Ahh, I'm gonna stop writing this long-** (ahem) review and just let you know that I am greatly enjoying reading these and that it's fantastic to see someone else who obviously loves this pairing as much as I do. ^__^ Okay, bye!
brenda smith
2008-12-03 . chapter 8
it was awsome i loved it this is my 2nd time reading it.
Krylancelo
2008-11-19 . chapter 12
Very good fanfic. I like Yuri and Conrad the best out of the characters so I'm happy there was such a long fic with them starring in it!
I hope you write others too!
kai
2008-10-25 . chapter 12
no it can't just end like that!! i dun get the last part..may i request a sequel..or rather..you must write a sequel!! i wanna see more in-depth plot and story like you have this one.. yuuri's growing as maou and i'd love to read more of it from you!! please.. i beg for sequel~~ the assasination thing is also left hanging there!! i can't believe this is finished unless you have a sequel planned ahead
SandraNratco
2008-10-04 . chapter 12
Aw, the epilogue really made me smile! Great story!
Paradoxial-Existence
2008-09-24 . chapter 12
this is a nice piece of art.. (teary eyed)

i give you 11 /10 :D

very well written ..
Paxwolf
2008-09-20 . chapter 12
Marvellous, Artemis, marvellous!

I really liked the way you ended this story, and I loved the way you subtly but beautifully expressed Yuri's growth here, and the integration of his innocent self with his Maou self. Nice! And I adored the scene on the balcony, and how you described the moment between them, and both of their awareness of each other.

And as realistic and perfect as it is, like Conrad, I hope he doesn't have to wait TOO long for Yuri!

Er, dare I ask if there'll be a sequel?? :-)

Pax
kitty
2008-09-19 . chapter 12
awesome ! love it ! plz make a sequel
kage-nedo
2008-09-18 . chapter 11
aww im sad it's over. nice fic! i'm particularly intrigued by how Yuuri grew in the end - was that why he was called to shin makoku this time around? the image of dust motes dancing around him is very vivid. thanks for the epilogue .. though it still left me wanting more. hehe.
Bookreader9999
2008-09-18 . chapter 12
Great story!! We need a sequel for after the wait (hint hint)!
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