I can even hear the tone of Stella's voice as she tells Danny that Flack will see him later, and see Danny's blushes.

Very well written - I loved it

Fantastic

That was too cute! I loved it, nice work : )

Very nice! I love that Stella doesn't get mad, she just informs Danny that it's time for him to leave. And I love the little comment that Stella doesn't dance to prove anything. She does it for herself - it just shows what a confident woman she is, and that she knows how...appreciative Flack is of her body.

Cute!

Good stuff! Laughing it off over here...
I love stories where you can just picture the scenario in your mind's eye, crystal clear.