I loved it! Thank you for writing such an entertaining story. Please continue with your writing, you tell a great story. I can't wait to start the next installment. I'll just start it right now!

KUTGW,
Noreen

I love this series so far! OMG i can't wait till nxt book!

I'm really looking forward to the next story! What's going to change? I'm begging you! Don't kill Cedric! And which one will be in the Tournament? Orion or Hayden? I'm anxiously waiting for the next story!

i LOVE this series. keep up the good work!!

So in the last week or so I read all of your stories, just now finishing Unknown Relations. Your work is great. I was on pins and needles the whole story waiting for Orion and Hayden to either figure out the truth or finally be told. There were so many clues that I couldn't believe it hadn't come up yet, though I understand your need to draw it out. I can't wait for Goblet of Fire. My only question now is whose name will be entered into the cup, Orion or Hayden? And please tell me that by some miracle you will keep Cedric from dying. I know he dies in cannon and that everyone else seems to hold true to that, but I'm hoping that with your tendencies to do the unexpected with plot lines that you will find some way of not letting Orion lose his brother. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Post soon!

Wow. So, having been a fan of your Midnight Series, I immediately gravitated towards the first Unknown Relations. However, I find I enjoy reading stories more if they are completed, so, I waited . . . and life hit me over the head and kept me away, so by the time I wandered back over, you had completed not only the first, but the second, and were almost done the third . . . I was thrilled!

I waited until this one was done before reading all three . . . and boy, I'm glad I did! I simply love, love what you've done to twist the canon around! I like how you've kept some things the same, and changed others only insofar as they apply to Orion and Sirius. It's . . . almost sad, to read about the kind of person Harry could have become had he had real parental figures and love in the form of family and friends from the beginning of his life.

Similar to your Harry in the Midnight Series, but more . . . well-adjusted, we shall say, Orion is such a wonderful character that while he isn't the boy-who-lived we all know and love (though, I suspect, in fact he is the boy-who-lived . . .), one completely sympathizes and responds to him. Especially within the context of his loving relationship with Sirius and Remus!

I'm enjoying this series immensely and I can't wait to see what you'll do with my two favourite books in the series (Goblet of Fire, and Order of the Phoenix). Having seen what you've done with Prisoner of Azkaban, my third fav book, I'm extremely excited. Unfortunately, I have nothing in the way of constructive criticism, other than the odd spelling or word placement mistakes I've caught (like 'is' instead of 'if'), but they didn't detract from my enjoyment of the stories.

Pfft, this has gone on long enough . . . to summarize I'm eagerly awaiting Goblet of Fire . . . although, life is getting heavy once more, so I probably won't be reviewing till its completion!

And as a small note . . . while I would accept you adhering to canon . . . I don't suppose Cedric could be spared? . . . You've made me love him so much :( . . .

Cheers,
Mytay

Thanks for another great chapter. Your story is so rich in its complexity and its sense of family. I don't think I've ever read an better twin BWL story that worked the sense of family between the two boys. I'm not sure if I'm really explaining how I feel well. But the relationships your characters have are so well done. It really makes this such a classic. In any case, thanks so much for taking the time to write and share your story with the rest of us.

I loved this story!! PLEASE DON'T KILL CEDRIC IN GOBLET OF FIRE!

Your universe is SO much better than the original Potterverse; going to be hard to beat these first 3 stories, but somehow I think you can do it.
The revelation of Harry/Orion's origin was well written, the ripples ought to be interesting for the summer upcoming. And how does it effect the way Orion will react to the Potter clan when they are forced together, as they will be in the future? Lots of material there to consider...

Awesome! I've been waiting for this moment throughout the whole series and it doesn't disappoint! I did notice there were a few times where Hayden seemed to know what Orion was feeling - will their bond form again? Good job, and can't wait for the sequel!

Please continute! I'm realy looking forward to the next part!

Did Snape give Ori the potion? He was in Hogwarts afterall. Evil Snape or mixture. Maybe wanting to save Lily's son because it's Lily's but causing as much trouble for the maurauders as possible.

I really enjoyed reading Unknown Relations 3. I bet Orion's gonna kick ** at the Quidditch Tournament if DE's show up.

Aw... poor Orion - this is the biggest shock of his life - will he hate the Potters now? After all, it's horrible pretty horrible finding out that two adults you know abandoned you...

It'll be actually very interestning to see how Rose and Hayden will react when they find out the truth about Harry. Who give Harry/Orion the potion - that's what really makes me wonder. Could it be Snape? Oh, so many questions and only few answers. Can't wait for "Goblet of Fire"! Great and fitting end to "Dementors of Azkaban".