A great story. Very good.

Hey this is cool really! More please now! I like it and hope you will write more but if not that's ok too.

I love it you are a great writer and i so agree with you until season 3 i think my favs were Xander willow then giles but after willow go well a more retarded charicter it went Xander then Giles but now i am not sure they are both my fav so what i am trying to say it i hope you go threw season 8 you know the comics lol

Cute!

Nice, I love the Saving Private Ryan addition, I like you have I high view of Xander and a low view of Willow after season 2 and Love Saving Private Ryan lets see were you take it.

Very well done! Love to see how this changes things.

sweet