is Inui into Iku or what??i think he is. but tezuka is definitely very into her. i like your story.its edgy.i hope you update fast because the story has been in my mind for ages now and i'm excited to know if tezuka and iku are having an affair by now.i mean im sure they are but how far are they in their affair.and why does it seem like inui wants to be alone with iku, you know, asking her to stop by his house with just the two of them.oh god please update asap

Inui's highlight in the manga/anime is when he played against Tezuka during a ranking match. I like how you explained his line of thoughts while he was battling the captain =D

Agano and Inui going to a fancy restaurant and celebrate his birthday? How delightful...and Fuji seems amused by it too. This chapter is awesome as usual. I can only pray that you update soon because I want to read some angst from Tezuka again. This is getting exciting!

Okay, now this is TOO sexy! Thanks for jumping on the sensual scene soon because as much as I like the will they won't they drama, I prefer it when two people get down with business. But I'm impressed as to how their scene is steamy and yet contained at the same time. There was kissing (lots of it) and foreplay but no congress which is good because Tezuka is, what, 14 and he'll probably get into trouble. But he handles himself pretty well here, as expected with the captain of the tennis club, he is stoical to the boot. You still managed to make him less unfeeling though and more human which makes the story a tad more engaging now that we see him and Agano getting their freak on, so to speak. I'm going to keep reading. I see that it's Inui's point of view next!!

Here I am, sweetie and I finally managed to logged in! So onto the review: I was glad that you finally updated but I only got to chapter four. Inui is my favorite Seigaku guy actually but I'm curious about Tezuka. The silent type usually is interesting and your story just proved that. I don't detect any oocness in your interpretation of him at all, you managed to describe his inner struggle as he tries to discover his sexuality. It's very strange but Tezuka seems likable here. In the manga, you don't know what he's thinking so it's nice that you have an insightful take on that.

This chapter is so delightful! Tezuka finally realized how he feels for this older woman and he seems terrified and excited about it. And not to mention he wants to indulge on the desire! I think I'm blushing when he had his first pseudo-sex dream. That was so funny! I will be reading the next chapter next and then I'll get back to you.

I'm going to bookmark this story. I can't stop reading but I really have to for now because it's late and dad wants his laptop back. I'll come back with a nicer review! Peace! @__@

I liked this chapter, it was cute. Your always so good with keeping characters in character, ive seen barely any oocness in your writing, and your plots are normally good. This is another good story, looking forward to the next chapter.

I try so hard not to like this story because I don't prefer Tezuka being paired to OCs and there are so many stupid fics about him and OCs and all which I have to give negative reviews because I should burst the Sue-authors' bubbles early before they continue to murder a decent character like Tezuka. Surprisingly, this is an exception. Your writing style has potentials and I'm not annoyed one bit that Tezuka is infatuated and sexually-aroused by this woman Agano. In fact, I'm rooting for them to do it already >D Tezuka is very intimidating here too because you portrayed him as 'easily holding it in' but really raging inside. I think that's deliciously0-conceived. This chapter proves it. You should write more. I would love nothing but to keep reading the escalation of Tezuka's relationship with Agano. Honestly, I'm intrigued with your summary. I wonder just how Agano plans to destroy him..Don't keep me in suspense for too long. I don't like that..hehe

Yay! You updated just after I finished reading! Thank you! *coughs* Anyway...this one is very good. Inui's POVs are always very entertaining. I want my TEZUGANO notebook too! And I've never read Wilde before, maybe I should, because you seemed to have focused on it in the early chapters. I like how Agano is acting right now; she seems less inscrutable and more charming...is that the right word? :P Well I still think she's very secretive and she's hiding something. I don't really know if I like her but she's definitely interesting!

-xoxoCB-

Wow, Tezuka is very raw. I don't recall him being so sexy and temperemental. Sexy, yes. But he seems very in control that it's hard to picture him otherwise. But you pulled it off! Congrats XD XD

Oh, I'm not really in the mood to log in so maybe next time. I just want to review this story quickly so I can get it out of my chest. Ready? Okay, here goes:

First off, your OC Agano is capricious but as the chapters progress, she seems likable enough to earn the attention of two adolescent boys. The way you switch the POVs from Tezuka to Inui is clever and you make sure that their POVs are distinct from each other; their voices on their chapters are clear and convicing so I give you points for that! I also want to say that Tezuka is a dull character, probably the dullest in Prince of Tennis and that's why I don't like him. But in this story of yours, he's strangely hyptonic. His words, his thoughts and even his self-loathing attitude when it comes to expressing his sexual needs are compelling. Some stories that feature him render him emotionless and boring which makes me hate this character more but I'm pleased to see that someone stepped up to the plate and interpreted him with more wit and justification.

So congratulations. My only critic is your tenses but you can always work on that, it just gets confusing sometimes. Other than that, your choice of adjectives and expression are very smart and often sly. Okay, I'll stop here. I don't want to drown you in compliments. Keep up the good work, kay?

i don't really like inui but he seems like he can give your story an edge...now that he seems interested on tezuka and agano, right? anyway, i still think this story is made of awesome. you write very well.

Tam

wow, this is so good. i like tezuka being paired to an older girl cuz i think he seems like the kind of guy who will be into that kind of thing, i mean he is so serious all the time so i won't be surprised if he likes someone who is older, right? i'm not usually into het stories when it comes to this fandom since there are so many boys you can pair but i will give this story a benefit of the doubt simply because i like how you write. it's refreshing because your descriptions are not overwhelming but at the same time it is deep :)

Tam

I really like how you apply a very convincing angle on Tezuka's 'awakening' (or simply 'puberty') His character is satisfying human, something I have never thought possible, considering that the dude has a cold personality that sometimes appears even unfeeling. But your interpretation of how Tezuka would act, how he would feel and think are right-on! This chapters is particularly a favorite of mine. It shows how psychologically exhausting it was for Tezuka when he realized that he does have a sexual bone in his body after all (and we all know where that bone is, XD). I'll keep on reading because I am honestly excited to see what happens next.

I also like how Inui seems deviant here but still calculating and reserved. And your OC is interesting in her way, although she seems creepy for some reason. Keep up the good work, sweetie!

-Chair Bear-

I love the tension and interaction between Agano and Texuka! Please keep going! I am very curious to find out what will happen next!

Hah, I love this story. It has a unique perspective on Tezuka and how he handles puberty (although he looks like he's reached puberty twice already). The subtle angst is very becoming of the situation too. Great work. This is a stretch to say, since there haven't been any updates recently, but I am begging for more.