 Enfleurage 2009-02-02 . chapter 4Lovely vignette and so nice to have the typically high quality work from you again. |
 Lady Razorsharp 2009-02-02 . chapter 4Ahahaha, nice. I guess this was Seb's full initiation into the Brothers Hawke! A long-standing family tradition of getting into/trying to break up bar brawls... |
 shel 2009-01-26 . chapter 4 i love it, rachel! the way seb feels left out and almost feeling guilty for being annoyed that he feels left out; the way caitlin gets it; the way saint john gets it and basically admits that it's still hard for him too; and just the way you show us hawke...
hope to see another snapshot soon! |
 mkitty 2009-01-25 . chapter 4Especially love that you wrote about Seb and Hawke. Really like Seb and want to read more about his interactions with his two older brothers! Very, very nice. Really enjoyed this. |
 zeilfanaat 2009-01-25 . chapter 4Awesome snapshot! :)
Loved it!
zeilfanaat |
 trecebo 2009-01-24 . chapter 4Great shot of the bros. just trying to connect. Totally them with the bar fight and all. |
 rainefan 2009-01-24 . chapter 4Excellent. I like the "period detail" of the frosted glass Coke bottle, too. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-01-24 . chapter 4Bang up job, Rachel as always! Very nicely done fitting it in with the timing of finding the additional siblings and reuniting the family. And yes, one can so identify with the emotions that run through it. Makes the characters very real and believable. Thanks for sharing. |
 rainefan 2009-01-07 . chapter 3What a beautiful piece. And a shirtless Hawke?! Well, that was a nice little surprise! |
 Lady Razorsharp 2008-12-17 . chapter 3A lovely little moment.
And Hawke, shirtless? Why, yes, I'll have some of that, thank you very much. *g*
Seriously, this is very well done. Brings back memories of the hope and uncertainty and sweet maddening dysfunction that is Hawke and Cait that I discovered when I first devoured your series. =) |
 trecebo 2008-11-19 . chapter 3Nice 'tweener piece, and you do these two so well. It's like going home when I read your stuff. Easy and pleasant, fits like a glove. And I enjoying being there, as much as I enjoy reading this. A lot. |
 patti 2008-11-19 . chapter 3 i love this story! so cute! |
 charlestonian-at-heart 2008-11-19 . chapter 3Very nice! Glad you're back. I'm missed reading your work. |
 sg1star 2008-11-18 . chapter 3what a lovely snapshot...nice to wake up and read before a hectic day. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2008-11-18 . chapter 3Nice scene. Takes a little doing to pick up exactly why Hawke was on the sofa - it's been a while since I read your others. But it was a welcome look back at how things were between Hawke and Cait. Always enjoy your stuff, hope you'll give us more soon. |