Wonderful. Beautifully written, excellently characterised and a last line that resonates. Awesome, well done.

"She remembers feeling like Juliet, and the comparison was right, just not for the reasons she thought; everyone thinks of Romeo and Juliet as being the ultimate love story, but really, when it comes down to it, it’s just a warning about what happens when two crazy kids think they’ve found forever.

You shouldn’t need forever, she thinks, when you’ve already got the gift of right now."

That line right there was so perfect, Actually, come to think of it, the whole thing was perfect. :-D

beautiful .. :)

ugh. amAzingg

Oh, I really liked this. A lot.

HA! I'm currently reading New Moon, and Bella/Jacob SHOULD be permanent, but I know Meyer didn't make it that way. Well, I'm not exactly a fan of the series, but Bella should have gotten together with Jacob. Not the glitter-boy.

Oh! This story is really nice! I love Jacob too. I actually didn't hate so much how Breaking Dawn ended, but I still love this pairing. Jacob is so cute and so tender... He is just the ideal man, I mean, he could be real (appart of the werewolf thing), Edward is too protective...
I just wanna congratulate you for this story, I've loved it so much. I like the ending: why worry about forever when you have a perfect right now?

I like the line about who needs forever when you have right now. I think that's a good line to live by.

I love it :D

aw! That's so swet! I love this story so much its not even funny! :) i love Jacob. ANd this story is awesome! EEP! She should have said she loved him and stuff tho! that would be so cute. they are a perfect couple. i love it. xD

That was so subtlety poignant. I still love Jacob and Bella even after reading Breaking Dawn. I think Stephenie Meyer gave us a little too much insight into what could have been. Well done though you write beautifully.

Congradulations on the wonderful story, it was very beautifully written.
It's so refreshing to read a story that isn't filled with angst or hurt. We need more storys like this.
Great Job!

Absolutely amazing. I loved this fic. It just totally cemented for me all my ideas about what's wrong with the E/B pairing and the unrealistic-ness of it all. Also, I completely agree with your ''romeo and juliet bashing'', especially since the reasons you gave for it were logical and weren't just plain hate bashing. Really, really good story!

Great story!

YES! Finally someone agrees with me! JacobBella rocks!