Well worth the wait! FABULOUS chapter!!

aw~ that was really cute. I love how you brought Alma into it.

awsome job! Can't wait for more!

KYA~! SO GOOD! MOREMOREMOREMORE! <3

I love this story. It's so wonderfully done. I just wanted to point out that your speling Krory's name wrong.

YOU. I.love.you.

This whole fic is absolutely fantastic and hot and awesome. I don't think I could put it in any other way that would get to the point and still compliment you enough. Hell, -that- doesn't even compliment you enough.

Mechanically speaking, this fic has got to be the closest to perfect I've seen on this site, no matter what fandom it's under. This one of the most well-written fics I've ever read.

I like how you capitalize on the confusion Kanda and Lavi are both struggling with concerning their growing feelings for each other. With a lot of the yaoi fics I read, the characters just kind of... realize they have feelings for each other, and maybe they'll try each other in little ways just for the sake of the game, and then confess, and they all lived happily ever after, yada yada yada. But the way the development in those stories is written is with the mentality of straight romance- to a certain extent, the characters are often times pretty openly gay once they confess, like 'oh, allen loved lavi, and he couldn't care less what others would think of them' (Not that I ship Laven more than Yuvi, it just seemed a little more believable).
If you want your story to actually be realistic, you have to have some hormonally mixed-up boys, and know how to work them into a believably unsure state, like you have. I like how you make their arguments sound heartfelt and -dare I say it- emotional?
I like the story with the Akuma, although I think it could use more development and less "what's he talking about? What's he keeping from me?" from Lavi's point of view. I think Kanda should get a little more POV time than here-and-there because Lavi's unconscious or asleep. But I like that you gave an Akuma a story like Hoshino-taicho does, making sure they have the center stage at a time other than the real battle.
Overall, I love this fic. Love love love love love. PLEASE. Update it sooner than fifteen days. I don't think so much love could cram itself into just 10 chapters. <3
~indigold

if there isnt a kissing scene soon i will hurt you because it is very mean to lead us and lavi on like this and not give us what they want...personally if i had a dream and i found something that was exactly like it was in my dream i would think that its more than coincidence

No the Cliffie!
whispering in Kanda's mind: -kiss him kiss him kiss him...- XDD

o/o I have to say... wow Kanda... just wow. xD That was... great! I had a deja vu moment in this chapter lol!! "A sigh slipped past the other exorcist’s lips and he lightly bonked Lavi on the head with his left hand purposely to emphasize a point" >_> My Yuu-chan did that to me too XD I was ftw!! but... different topic lol

Hope next chapter is up in next 15 days or sooner (but understand if it'll take longer too).
Enjoying as much as previous chapters!

wahh, exciting, hopefully your next chapter will be soon on the net as well:D good work:D keep going:)

If you don`t update, say, NOW, I`ll DIE! want that on your concious?

please, soon!

I love this story. It so sad a yet creepy all at the same time.

YES! Finally an update. and yes please finish the story soon before you just stop writing at all! please!

Oh, interesting. Can`t wait for more.

Love the new chapter! AN was depressing though. I haven't lost interest at all. Rather you take longer to write it while enjoying yourself than rush it just to get it over with. :(