silly girl.. reinette doesn't compare to you :P

Damn you with your bittersweetness!

Lovely; Jealous!Doctor is always fun to read, followed swiftly by Oblivious!Doctor...

Ha... ouch.

Take that Doctor...

*mutters mean about Reinette*

Such a surprise at the end there if I'm honest, coz the Doctor didn't think about his own flirting did he?

Good piece

Oh wow, that's an excellent way to follow up the whole Reinette thing. I always hated how there wasn't much follow-up to the Reinette issue in the show and this is a great bridge. You used the details so well and it was a solid piece. Great job.

Oh, my, that was a sad little piece.

I can only hope things'll get straightened ou in a sequel? :)

ooh, wow, this was great- loved the detail of the stem cracking, the pretty/shifty boy's name being Lewristronal- terrifically alien, as was the description of the planet. and the Doctor's thoughts seemed so dead-on (i especially loved 'he was still rather proud of that' on not giving Jack the opportunity) - great build up to a definitely angsty end- left me wondering what he said to that! nice job :D

Ouch.

That was good. Thanks :-)

as my friend danielle would say: "OH! DISS!"

nice point of view on that, really captivating

Oh my that was GREAT! I loved it. nicely played out and tied together. I had no idea where it was leading till the end, which was a nice difference than most stories on here. Can I beg you to keep going with this. Either way this one story has convinced me to go look at all your other stuff so HA your stuck with me.