Nice story so far! Haven't picked up on the "romance" part of it yet...but that'll come. The french to english is a nice touch, it helps me picture their conversations. Keep up the good work!

update please

love the story so far keep going

CRUD! pressend enter and it submitted!
anyway like i was saying sorry, I ike the idea of the srory.

I see that you want to change it and the only things that I would suggest are

1) make it longer! dont teaase me! lol
2) try to type with the accent, Gambit has such a cute accent! I would assume that his sister does too.
3) I think she might have a more french name, like Remy and Jean-Luc..maybe Renee or something

Well, Gambit is my favorite character and I like his little sister idea, I also cant wait to find out what her mutation is.

Please keep going! I have been searching for a story about Gambit's sister but can never find any!

the story sounds like i would have what it takes to be worth reading but its just to darn short

Great beginning

Not too bad a start. You have a few errors but overall it is readable, might try reading it after you let it sit for a couple of days. Keep working on it and I'm sure it will get better. Might want to explain why Henri doesn't like her and what her mutation is.