This was very good. I'm not going to get all emotional about it, but I have to say this was what one could call a very good tear jerker. It's espcially realistic too and you do quite the job in keeping evreyone in character. I have to say, the ending was perfect, I'm glad you didn't flash forward or leave us with a happily ever after ending, and you gave one the oppurtunity to figure out what would happen next, though it is a bit obvious since this is KH. Also, "I know you will"-very deja vu, in a sweet way. Good job.

oh, that was so sweet. we hardly get to see this side of Riku and Kairi.

How lovable this pairing is.

I know you didn't intend it to be a romance, but it appears as a start, dear Winnie.

You should write more RiKai, you have talent with it.

Anyway, I should go find Grey so I can get her ready for her vet appointment. How's Izzy?

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SO UNBELIEVABLE CUTE! Aweh, poor wittle Riku xDD

Oh, I love the way you ended that, and this side of Riku is definitely not portrayed enough by most authors. You did it very well. Nice job!

omg that was so cute! i love the bro/sis relationship.

Aww! ^_^ I love the way you used "I'll come back, I promise." With Riku.

Aw! So sweet! Great job! ~Ila

Cute! Just enough sensitivity for the fic NOT to be Riku/Kairi ROMANCE FLUFF instead of Riku/Kairi FRIENDSHIP FLUFF!

Aw, that was so adorable! It totally fits, too. I think I'll put this in my C2! (Hey, that rhymes!)