i loved it

Wow, that was really good for being your first newsies fic! You kept Race in charecter really well, and Gracie seems like a cool charecter :) Not to mention, I learned a thing or two about poker. Now I can write about more that just Blackjack in my fics! I hope to see more newsies stuff from you. Maybe a sequel to this? I wanna see how the boys react!
Keep it up!

I absolutely love this. It' so cute, and really funny. I kind of figured out she was faking halfway through, but it was still good reading.

You should do an extension of this. It would be really amusing to see the reactions of the rest of the Newsies. Especially if it comes down between her and Racetrack at the end.

I really liked this! I liked the playful tone and the dialouge between Racetrack and Gracie. You portrayed them as being in a new relationship flawlessly; there were moments when they were a little shy/nervous, but they were still excited to be with each other. Seriously, great job!